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Because I'll be very busy during these 10 months, I should not let my passion to draw disappear x3 !

Enjoy, I'll try to draw a page per day, but I'm not sure I'll be able to xD ! Anyway...

As you probably noticed, this comix deals with Raian, Naiar, Clonny and Marianne.

Officially, in this comix, Clonny is Raian's fiancée, and Marianne is Naiar's girlfriend.
Somebody told me a thing about "4th wall", well...

Raian is my avatar, and I want him to "bear" the fact that I'm in a AFPA now ( trainning course ) so he's doing the same too !

Hopefully for him, Naiar, MArianne and Clonny came with him. Cylia and Nils decided to keep Raian's home during his trainning course x3 !

And because I really need to work on my drawings, it's gonna be yiffy x3 !

( Current mistakes : Scales proportions mistakes, the tap seems lower than it supposed to be. / Pose error, Raian looks unnatural and not curvy enough... / Size troubles, sometimes Marianne is taller than she should be... / Fake charas : Sometimes, I forget some details on the charas, ( glasses, bag, wrong shirt... ) and to finish, Clothes ( unnatural, ugly and impossible... ) )

I REALLY NEED SOME TRAINNIG O_O !!!!

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Type: Comic
Published: 13 years, 7 months ago
Rating: General

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Shadowwalk
13 years, 7 months ago
Training aside, you're off to a good start.  And when you learn more, I look forward to the result   =)
RaianOnzika
13 years, 5 months ago
Thanks ^^ !
ButtercupSaiyan
13 years, 6 months ago
The way she is sitting doesn't quite look right... it's kind of slanted, kind of top heavy, more like she is standing in front of the bed leaning on it than actually resting her ass and hands on the mattress. It doesn't have the proper sense of weight. Her knees should bend more, for one thing.
RaianOnzika
13 years, 5 months ago
Indeed, I must really work on the weight effects on background, depending if the place is soft or hard... We really have this weird feeling that the mattress is a stone XD
ButtercupSaiyan
13 years, 5 months ago
Ummm, I draw too many fabric wrinkles too. It's a failing of mine. Overdetailing, not remembering when less is more.
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