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Please... Critique me.

This is for a project I'm working on and I want it to look its best before I start coloring it.

I'm most concerned about the anatomy and the foreshortening. I"ve been looking at it too long to figure out if her feet or anything look weird.

Please keep it constructive, whether positive or negative.

Thanks dudes!

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Type: Sketch

Published: 8 years, 8 months ago

Rating: General

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NioFloofArtist

8 years, 8 months ago

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Well, as far as proportions go, it seems that the arms should be more thicker. That way, the shoulders would connect to the neck in a way that would make sense.

Other than that, I can't really comment on the feet since this is a perspective shot. The drawing has a unique style, like the rest of your works.

monkeycheese

8 years, 8 months ago

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@ NioFloofArtist

You're the only one that's mentioned the shoulders so far. I think you might be right. The arms should be a little wider.

Most of the criticism has been about her back/left foot is too small... but I'm still not sure about that.

Processing critiques is hard!

NioFloofArtist

8 years, 8 months ago

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@ monkeycheese

I guess taking drawing classes really got me to understand things like this, but since you have a very stylized cartoonish approach to your drawings, I wouldn't think too hard on it if I were you.

Yes, it's good to receive anatomy advice from other artists, but since I'm still learning to find my own style, it's best to take it with a grain of salt more than anything.

PandaMouse

8 years, 8 months ago

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o.o Hummm Is she flying or jumping? And loving the zappers and sweet hair! And you might want to try this in two different positions, this and side pose! V v V Most old games are side strollers, she need a enemy in the background The rest looks great !

Good luck and have fun!

monkeycheese

8 years, 8 months ago

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@ PandaMouse

She's jumping.

No I only want one drawing. The hope is that this is clear enough to put it on a tshirt.

PandaMouse

8 years, 8 months ago

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@ monkeycheese

Ok! ^v^

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