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Short story feedback?

Hey watchers!

Sorry for the lack of arts lately, I'm hoping to turn that around soon.

In the meantime, I haven't been entirely uncreative. I've revised a short story and have shown it to several friends, but none of them have given me really constructive feedback (or much at all).

I stumbled upon the original story "Conversation with God" on High Ideas, I discovered that it had a very liberating wiki-commons license and was inspired to adapt it.

Anyone interested can comment here or PM and I can email or send the Story (and if they like, I could link the original version, if they can't find it themselves hehe).

Just to provide some context, the original is written by an atheist philosopher, and provides a rational model of theism. I adapted it ;3

comment or note if interested!
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