What do you like about my stuff, what do you dislike? Which pieces I've posted so far this year do you like/dislike? What could I improve on? Just a little feedback journal, don't be afraid to be honest :p
I love that your work takes place from a wide variety of perspectives and angles - i don't mean that in a pseudo-intellectual "diverse audience" kind of way, I mean that in a physical point of observation manner. So many artists here are virtually married to their preferred framing so every time you update I'm happy to see the horizon shift, if you even include the horizon in the perspective you provide. I like seeing your characters bodies have a sense of weight and biology to them, and their clothing has structure and limitaitons.
The only issue I ever would take with your art, and, you, as the artist, have 100% right to veto me on this subject - is that I think you could broaden your subject matter beyond the stilton sisters, Ponies, and Pokemon a bit more often. There's nothing bad or wrong about any of those subjects, if anything the core fans are thrilled with your work - and I know you do draw other characters from outside those series frequently - I just would love to see *even more* anthros done in your style.
Improvements... improvements... That's... really difficult because you do highlights excellently, your shading is on point, no anatomical problems .... you put texturing to your girl's hair you have any idea how uncommon and well done that is? if I had to say anything - your backgrounds sometimes look like an afterthought. Clearly all of your effort went into the central subject and the purpose of the trees, couch, pool, whatever subject mater is behind them is to not have that character be hanging in a void of empty paper. But, you know I'm grasping at straws when i insult your palm tree's honor.
I love that your work takes place from a wide variety of perspectives and angles - i don't mean that
I really feel like you should start changing up the body types and breasts sizes you do. As amazing as your art is, one of the things I've come to notice is that you only ever draw one kind of body: Slim, but with low-hanging breasts. And, while you're amazing at making such a body type look sexy, it is the only thing you do. And it does get boring after a while, as you don't seem to want to draw anything else.
I think dabbling in other kinds of body types would be the perfect way to give your art more variety.
I really feel like you should start changing up the body types and breasts sizes you do. As amazing
It shows off some of your skills. You care about anatomy and perspective, and you do try new things. It even tells a little story! We see something exciting!
I’ve noticed you’ve asked for feedback many times, and so I will take that as a sign you genuinely want to improve with your art. I’m going to share my honest thoughts with the hope it helps you succeed with your endeavors.
1. We’re not getting snapshots of your world. The characters often focus on us, or an audience surrogate, but that limits the stories you can tell. The reason Beachvolley Maus~ works is because it is a picture into your world and your characters. They’re moving more, they’re doing their own thing, and we can imagine the story. “Oh, she’s playing Volleyball at the beach!” We’re not given all the answers, but we get enough to reasonably believe how we got to this point. I know you tried that recently with Rainbow Dash, Twilight, and Spike, but because Rainbow Dash was looking at us, it didn’t feel like we were watching their moment.
2. Make male characters. They can still be audience surrogates without being blank faces. Let us see their reactions! Don’t just have Kirsten giving a titjob: show she’s doing a great job by letting us see how the guy reacts. If you’re not comfortable with drawing the faces, then have the guys feel like they’re interacting more! Grabbing her head, stroking her hair, or even talking to her. Let the guys speak!
3. Movement. You had Paulina going for that ball, but only her tits jiggled. Go for more!
4. Environments could use some minor details to make them feel lived in. Even if it’s just pictures or posters on the wall, it makes it more eye-catching and real.
I can see you are trying new things, and that’s very important for a good artist. You have been adding more and more to your art than you used to, and that’s good. Keep at it!
You did the right thing asking for critiques. I’m struggling to get back into writing myself after years of neglect and lack of effort, but I can tell you try. Keep at it, and I hope these critiques help!
So, I really like this one: https://inkbunny.net/s/3556260 It shows off some of your skills. You ca
