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Hello guys, I would like to ask you a more detailed opinion about my work, what do you think visually speaking and topics reguard my stuff at the moment?

Is there something i might need to change or improve? Or everything seems fine to you?

Are there more characters you would like to see? New proportions you would like to see me experimenting with in general?

Tell me your feedback!
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Added: 1 week ago
 
Spiderbone
1 week ago
Honestly? You do great already. I think everything you do is just fine as it is.
cmcfilly
1 week ago
longer videos would be nice. I'm a fan of a few of your videos involving the two fillies who record each other fucking adult ponies for bits and the video about the slut whose always hiding from her abusive father who gave the principle a blowjob while he was talking to her daddy, videos like those with a short story or event.
ezequiell
1 week ago
More lolis and exhibitionism
MechaTomX
1 week ago
I Agree with cmcfilly, more longer videos, they have an amazing quality, I also admire you because many people create that type of content out of curiosity or to cross lines, but it's clear that what you do does cross lines; you do it mainly for the love of art, you are one of the best in Inkbunny.

And for the characters I like to see is more Mapple with any filly of his class, or fillies if things get spicier, young love always is cute.
Ljgarrett375
1 week ago
I love your animation  young and twerking are my favourite keep it up😀🙂😎
peterbear
1 week ago
Love your content. The long voice acted videos are my favorite.

Content wise I'd love to see more BDSM. In general more kinky and depraved stuff. Especially little girls doing depraved stuff and throughly enjoying themselves.

My two favorite things I'd love to see are rimming and Cub dom (especially girl pegging a guy).
Fens
1 week ago
Hmm...

Generally your work's really neat!  Obviously your content focus is up to you, but as for my own preferences I'd love to see more work with dark situations; questionable- and non-consent, peril, BDSM, servitude and so on.  Continuing to see young characters as well!  Not to mention abuse of authority, bad parenting...

As for criticisms?  Few!  It would be great to see even more growth in your ability to have characters portray emotions...

Oh but, this may be more of a pet peeve, but your use of those pony models with the 'lipstick' does kinda drive me up the wall, most especially on foal characters x.x  There's a much better style of pony model floating about, isn't there?  Better proportioned, no weird lipstick... I'm sorry I don't know enough about the 3D pony scene to name names, though.

As for proportions?  Not... really... it's always interesting to see characters dealing with the consequences of having disproportionate anatomy though - opai-loli for instance - especially as a point of humiliation or manipulation.

Anyway thanks for the opportunity to be critical or so!

Oh yeah and that adorable raver pony with the twintail mane and the pacifier necklace - the one that looks a bit like Pinkie Pie - would be amazing to see stuff happen to, too!  'Specially in the aforementioned scary situations.
KevinSnowpaw
1 week ago
you do so much excellent filly loli I would LOVE to see more of your two colt boys... Boy on Boy Boy on Stallion or even colt on filly! thats allways a FUN one!
Arkunus
1 week ago
I'd definitely would love to see my oc getting involved with your characters once in a while.
burmecianblue
1 week ago
Would you ever consider making a Snails model? He's a little goofy and non-standard as far as ponies go. But I always had a soft spot for him.

As for content. Stuff like public use, size difference, feet, and non/dubcon get my vote.
Kayla2104
1 week ago
i think you work look amazing you put a lot of efford in creating videos and poster so the are nice too watch and look at and i think the ideas you use so fare are good too so keep it up^^
SergeSkunk
1 week ago
For the most part I think your stuff is really well done, but I personally think keeping things silent or with minimal VO or sound effects would be the way to go. I know for a lot of people it adds a lot more, but I think allowing the audience to imagine their own Voices or Sounds is far more effective or enticing. Beyond that, I actually think everything else is great!

For myself personally, I'd like to see more male characters to interact with the female characters, and I know I'm likely in the minority here, but I'm also the type who like more natural sizes when it comes to cocks, I've noticed a lot of creators and artist tend to go very large or to hyper sizes for them and it just gets silly for me to see it all the time. XD

Also, I'd also just like to see more incest over all. I know it's likely not the focus, but I've really enjoyed the incest content you've made so far. XD
Danmacross
1 week ago
Im interested on seeing more colt/shota related videos and renders! Besides since you made that animation of a giant spike and tiny Sweetie Belle,i was wondering if we would see more size difference/macro style scenarios!
Fur915
1 week ago
I’m interested in seeing characters driving cars / vehicles and pushing the accelerator , brake and/or clutch pedals
Neill
1 week ago
I think you do an awesome job with every new submission, CDV. It's always great to see your new stuff when you complete  a new animation. You have improved a lot over the years and it shows.

I personally love these two cuties:



Wouldn't mind seeing more of them doing their sexy dancing and 'pole-dancing' on a throbbing hard stallion pole.

PapaDragon69
1 week ago
Your videos are great, and there's no need to change them.

As for what I like to see more, I'd prefer seeing more toddler stuff. Maybe even a foal experiencing and enjoying public nudity for example.
iorarua
1 week ago
I'm a Substar supporter. I love your stuff. Your scenarios and storytelling are great.  Really hit some nice spots for me. :) The only thing I could see someone complaining about is maybe the fluids?  But fluids are always super difficult and yours aren't all that bad.  Just trying to think of what someone might be distracted by or not enjoy.  I love your girls, I love some fun foaldom that you've explored a time or two, I love the cut shy and embarrassed expressions you do so well. Love your stuff a lot and look forward to lots more in the future :)
peanuts
1 week ago
Honestly, I think you're doing pretty well as you are. I'd most like to see hornier, more submissive and slutty girls, but I kind of like the variety that you've already got anyway
Dragonofdarkness13
6 days, 21 hrs ago
In General I think you do great with your animation work

I honestly think I'm going to be alone on this but personally I'd wish you didn't put full sized Non-Anthro Horse Dicks on an Anthro character.
xephion
6 days, 20 hrs ago
to be honest some of my favorite works from you are the ones that are about humiliation or dares or petplay (like ultima arena i know you are not happy about this one bc of the person who didnt pay but i love the setting a lot and the magic was well done too, i just wish the humiliation part was longer. but everything was great)
bluedragonblue
6 days, 19 hrs ago
I really, really like your work. There's something about it that hits me in a way most porn doesn't.
MomartikPSITIME
6 days, 18 hrs ago
Well...maybe some more combination of cub stuff and sexual watersports ? Like you did in that famous dare video and the other aftermath one with those same cute girls :3
Other than that, technically speaking it's pretty good enough I'd say
Arikado
6 days, 18 hrs ago
I got an idea for potentionally better motion capturing!

Try adding weights to your body to make hips and chests sway more naturally
Isa877
6 days, 12 hrs ago
The models look really solid, though the voice acting is a bit weak. Often either has none or the acting feels artificial or forced. I also think more POV content would be beneficial like Facesitting or blowjobs. Especially with a big milf and a shota animation or something
WarhorseIndra
6 days, 12 hrs ago
Your doing really fine overall. Only thing I would say is don't be scared to try some new stuff or maybe just explore with other pairing.
Dragonlord354
6 days, 10 hrs ago
Im not going to comment on what I'd like to see because people going "oh oh! Gimmie more (insert thing)" are annoying to me and i dont even art. But what i will say is that your animations are awesome, your models are clean, and i really enjoy your content.
Yodasy
6 days, 1 hr ago
Your videos are brilliant. I just wish there were more sound and a little tickling and peeing.
QuirkyView
5 days, 20 hrs ago
Your animations are generally good and the kinks and ideas you show with your animations are awesome, the main reason I follow you. I think the models could do with some improvements, your animations are some of the few that I like in spite of the "SFM look".
slimshod
5 days, 10 hrs ago
Personally, I'd like to see some updated textures. Stock SFM is ok for a bit, but after a while it gets bland and boring to look at.

As for scenarios, play to the strengths of each filly's personality. Let the scenarios speak for the filly and her interests. I'd also like to see more mare/filly stuff too.
Daneasaur
5 days, 4 hrs ago
I'm quite happy with how you've been doing content as a whole.

I would like to see Spike thrown into the mix a bit more. I feel his character is prime to be "roped into" situations with various characters.
R0XIZ
4 days, 19 hrs ago
You are awesome at what you do! I'd personally love to see more loli strip club videos, or maybe a loli "pony brothel stable", or even a pony magazine lewd photoshoot
pokebreeder25
3 days, 3 hrs ago
more lolis having fun with female adults please maybe one of the girls meets a herm and becomes that herm's pet loli? some pregnant lolis could be fun as well maybe one with a big pregnancy fetish?
NaiveCynic
2 days, 3 hrs ago
Love the loli-on-loli stuff, not crazy about age difference, turned off by horse cock and hyper cock.  Loved the lesbian domination with Rabble and the yellow horse (name forgotten) and the pee games.  I guess, more Rabble and same-age young'uns?
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