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NeoPatamonX

Requesting Feedback on Twine style smut

Hello friends!

https://neopatamonx.neocities.org/simulacub/ I started this project a long time ago but I lost steam on it. I had a plan of blitzing a fast story with non-linear progression to make a mildly gamified erotica experience.

A nice thing about Twine too is that it's pretty friendly on multiple platforms, so you should have no issues reading on your cellphone in bed.

I wanted feedback in:
* Is this a format you'd enjoy to see?
* I'm hosting these myself to avoid platform stigma on what seems to be the modern geocities, but I'm curious if there's maybe alternatives?
* What kind of themes would you like to see from me?

I appreciate your time~

Also... I need to learn how to thumbnail stories and make them more visible on this platform. I feel like I write well but I don't get nearly as much engagement on works as I did back in the day.
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Added: 6 months, 2 weeks ago
 
AsbieArts
6 months, 2 weeks ago
At first I thoguht it'd be like 2D tweening animation and you had me worried for a sec, but I've seen these types of story CYOA thingies before and they're really cool!
I believe you can include artwork and whatnot in these, it's a very flexible environment, and the ability to choose always enhances the investment readers have, or at least /I/ have :D

I look forward to what you cook with this!
NeoPatamonX
6 months, 2 weeks ago
I've been considering additional features like images and more gamification, but I need to focus more on actually finishing content first XD

I'm glad you're excited~
AsbieArts
5 months, 3 weeks ago
Yeah, sky's the limit but its important to be grounded and make a solid base first, otherwise it just gets out of control
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