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Dumb Idea

Kid asks parent what it's like to be dead.
They respond saying to go ask a dead person.
They take this literally.
Goes around talking to dead bodies.
Rumors spread around about a crazy cub talking to corpses.
Maybe get's ironically locked into a tomb by bullies?
Freaks.
Eventually comes to terms with their surroundings.
Starts cursing out loud about the kids that locked them here.
An old bony Grandma tells them to mind their tongue, and that one of the kids that put them in here has a bed wetting problem.
Oh Shit. Their speaking to the dead.
What's it like to be dead?
Bah. Leave me alone. I'm tired.
She stops talking, but not before telling him a secret about one of the other kids.

Thought maybe they could grow up to be a witchdoctor and perform voodoo to help paraplegics to get the feeling back into their legs.
I have too many stupid thoughts I can't make them all.

Like the one where it's basically a looping, falling universe. Falling cities simply use flight to travel for it's denizens.
I hope I described that one how I see it.
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Added: 4 months, 1 week ago
 
Cainesama
4 months, 1 week ago
Not a bad premise on the talking to the dead. Maybe have them be obsessed with watching funerals from afar, claiming they can hear "voices" that are not from the living crowd or whispers from mausoleums as they explore the graveyard. Hearing secrets of from the dead is a classic cool idea, can lead to some interesting karma for the bullies and maybe some closure for loved ones of the departed.

Or if you really want to go nuts, have one of the dead tell them about a hidden fortune they had in life. Now I may want to write something like this!
ArielCelestia
2 weeks, 2 days ago
Perhaps that grows an interest in the lad in beautiful funerals, burial gowns and playing dead?
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