So, what do y'all actually like?

I've picked up a few likes and followers now, I feel I've earned the right to probe my audience a little bit. No, not in that sense.

Directly, as I've said elsewhere, I'm Aro-Ace, it's a little hard to know what people like and don't. So, very simply, what of my limited work here do people enjoy? Were there any favoured scenes or themes that struck a cord with you? What is it I'm doing right, so I can make you have more fun?

I guess by that same token, what am I doing wrong as well? Criticism in good spirit is more valuable than praise, and as a TTRPG GM, I've learned that lesson several times over. Is there anything I'm blind to which you feel would make my work even better for you?

And if the answer is not enough spell checking and grammar editing, I know, I'm very sorry, I often re-read my posts several times after and realise post release.

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peacem92

6 months, 2 weeks ago

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I’m a very simple guy. I see a story about impregnation. If I like it I give it 3 stars, watch the author and hope for more stories. Because there are many times an author would write 1 or 2 stories then disappear. While others would write only the occasional story that I like and the rest is stuff that doesn’t appeal to me. A lot of your stories are very appealing to me and I’ll admit that it will be hard to narrow it down to one favorite scene. But I’ll certainly try.

I honestly think that the story of the fox mother and herm son is probably my favorite overall. Especially the final love making scene they share. However, the cloud seeding scene where the girl in the story first experiences the “grey goo” only to have her mother on the phone share her same fate is a close second for me.

As for criticism, aside from the occasional grammatical error (which I am just as guilty of) I don’t know of any real criticism I can give. I hope that this is ok. You really are a good author and I always look forward for more content from you!

GuiltyDen

6 months, 2 weeks ago

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@ peacem92

Someone else bitten by the breeding bug eh?
Yeah, pretty much everything I write is going to end up having impregnation at least alluded to. It and power play are my main kinks, incest a close third place.

I'm glad the effect I was going for with Cloud Seeding worked for you. I'm trying to do fun things with each piece to differentiate them a little, prevent my style getting too repetitive.

And the feedback is very appreciated. My main concern is always not balancing the sex to story ratio correctly, so hearing that my biggest problem is just a failure in editing is a relief.

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