I'm hoping y'all can help me with my stories.

Hi, I could really use your feedback on the stories I post. An easy way to do this would be just to leave a quick comment after you read just saying if you liked or disliked it & if you want a list of what you did like or didn't like, feel to be as detailed or vague as you want. If you don't want to it's totally fine, I just thought I would ask. Thanks.

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Added:	2 years, 6 months ago 07 Jun 2022 04:41 CEST

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joao208

2 years, 6 months ago

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Well, to be perfectly honest i do like pretty much all the stories you post, the ones that involve pokemon.

Dolores1Umbridge

2 years, 6 months ago

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@ joao208

Thanks

sucmel

2 years, 6 months ago

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My favorite stories of yours are the ones in which cubs gain weight.

Dolores1Umbridge

2 years, 6 months ago

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@ sucmel

Thanks

poison8510

2 years, 6 months ago

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Ok from re-reading at least one of your stories, I like your stories overall, but I felt the ending for the raboot corrupted one just kinda came outta nowhere like you ran out of steam, I love the corruption but the ending was kind of abrupt to me. Personally, I'd also prefer that they may get their own pages, like under pictures is nice, but I like spaces between paragraphs, it gives me an easier time figuring out where I am when I lose my place. I don't know if that's just an IB formatting thing or what. I do enjoy your stories and hope this doesn't come off as harsh, just kinda waking up.

Dolores1Umbridge

2 years, 6 months ago

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@ poison8510

It's the formatting, I can start posting separate stories again, & yes I do run out of steam.

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