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Idea: Futanari Blaze the Cat - POV taker

    It has been a year now since I came to this world, the mobians, as they call themselves, were very welcoming. I was capable of securing home and a group of friends. One of them is actually a queen named Blaze the Cat, she has an amazing body; maybe it is the fact that there are no human females in this place but to be frank all the women in this dimension are so hot. I see them walking around with bodies that could drive any man crazy, and nobody seems to make even a single comment on that.
    There is another thing that is different from my world, some females are what is called a "futanari", or woman with both female AND male genitalia. This is the case with Blaze, nobody seems to notice or mention her huge bulge, at the beach that monster dances around and even slips out of her swimsuit. Even when she starts having a humongous erection in front of everybody there is not a soul looking at it, either it is something normal or nobody even cares. But I can see it... I can see the pattern on her erections too. Every time I get close to her, she gets hard; it is almost an immediate response. Nudity is also very common in this world as well (males tend to be nude 24/7) so it is not rare to see her just walking exposing her body in all its glory. I know I may be just paranoid, but every time she talks to me her cock begins to throb and grow. She is also very nice to me, I think she finds me attractive, but I don't know what to do about it.
    The other day we were at the beach. I approached the group, there were many attractive women there, it is a good thing nobody noticed that kind of stuff here because containing my erecteion was impossible, and speaking off... Blaze was there, she was wearing a black bikini, her massive cock was hanging on the side of it (there was not even point in trying to hide it inside of it anyway), as soon as I approached it became hard: long and veiny, looks like 25 cm (12 inches) with her foreskin partially covering the head. I can see a bit of precum leaking from the tip. I sat there as we talked about some fat dude on a robot who was trying to conquer the world or something like that, but couldn't pay attention. Blaze was standing right next to me with her penis close to my face, it was forming a perfect 90° angle between that monster of a cock and her hard abs, just at the height of my lips. At some point everyone wanted to go play volleyball and she turned around. It was then when her tip brushed my lips, the touch was gentle, barely noticeable... But I felt it. I felt it as if electricity in the place of contact, my heart beated like crazy and that sweet smell of hers invaded my nose. A bit of her precum remained on my lips, I licked it with my tongue and the taste was glorious. I can tell she is clean, so that smell was just her natural scent, as if it was my animal side reacting to her pheromones... I can't handle this anymore. I watched her thick ass walk away to the volleyball net and then saw her gorgeous body move around playing. I decided not to play (they all have abilities that leave me in the dust when it comes to physical prowess)
    When she was done playing she returned, her dick dancing between her muscular legs as she walked. When she entered our tent she grabbed a water bottle and began to drink, she stopped just in front of me and her cock got hard gain, her tip just in front of me. It was maddening, it was just at licking distance. It was such a luck that everyone else went for a snack, because I could not control myself much longer. I touched the tip with my lips once again, the sensation was even more intense than before. She reacted and looked down on me. -What are you doing?- she said. - I am not sure... Sorry- I replied with one hand on her shaft and the other one softly touching her balls. - Should I stop?- I said. She bited her lip before saying - Don't you dare, I wanted this so bad.- She blushed after saying that and looked away, apparently she felt too embarrassed to say that for some reason. I started playing with her foreskin using my tongue, before noticing I had peeled it all the way down. I was no longer thinking rationally, I started kissing her cock all the way to the base. - I have no idea what you are doing but I love it- she whispered, apparently blowjobs are not common here?. Her humongous titan of a penis was so thick I could not even wrap my hand around it, I don't know how she managed to push it down my throat. She was fucking my face with such ease, I didn't knew I could be so flexible. I lost track of time, but at some point I felt her throbbing even more, she pulled out and rested it on my face, it was so warm. -Wait, I want to do it inside you - she said while gasping. She picked me up like I weigh nothing and then took me to a more pritaved place at super speed.
    - This is better, now please turn around and bend over. I can't take it anymore.- I recovered from the trip quickly and followed her instructions, I wanted to look at her eyes a bit more but I also wanted her to feel comfortable. I felt her tip, still soaking wet from saliva and precum, pressing on my ass. I could not help but to clench, I have never done such a thing before. - You are always staring, don't think I didn't noticed- she said as she grabbed my shoulders and started licking my ears - I thought you didn't liked me, i'm glad I was wrong. Every part of me wanted to make you mine, every second of contact with you was torture, I am so happy you felt the same way as me- she said as her tip pushed harder every time, I started relaxing. It was so wet, like if it was completely coated on lube. -Why didn't you say anything sooner?- I said. - Why didn't you? - she got me there... - I am royalty, I cant just fuck anyone I see. I have responsibilities, and royal subjects's needs to think about. But I can't hold myself anymore.- I understood his position, I wanted to ease her worries and said the first thing that came to mind - What if I become your loyal subject... And tend to your needs?- I felt her heart skipping a beat, there was a moment of silence. She grabbed my neck and pushed her cock all the way to the base inside of me. I wanted to scream but I could not, it was an overwhelming amount of pleasure. She hugged me from behind and kissed my neck before immediately cumming inside of me. She pumped gallons of cum inside of me, I came to that very moment. She moaned and grunted, when I thought she was pulling out I realized she was still hard as a rock and started pounding me with her cum coated cock, she keep pounding and cumming. At some point she just pulled out and tons of semen came out of my asshole, after a second she went inside of me again while biting the other side of my neck. I felt like we kept at it for hours, she then turned me around and lifted me we started kissing as she pumped a final massive load inside of me.
    Finally I felt her going soft. We were both gasping for air, I was resting my head on her shoulder. Her soft boobs (that I had no chance to pay attention to) pressing on my chest- My loyal subject?- she whispered. - Yes, I am yours. - I responded. In that position she grabbed my cock and balls -I promise to take care of your needs too next time.- I could feel her hand covered in body fluids softly caressing me down there. -You just did, my queen. - She smiled at me and kissed my forehead. - Yes, but maybe I want to see if my royal subject can provide me with more than just pleasure in the long term. - I could not process what she said for I was at the brink of passing out. - Hehe, don't worry. I will take you to your home, for now. We shall bond a lot more in the future, darling.- I could feel her lips over mine right before losing consciousness.

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(Hello, inmersion here. Yeah this is just a random Idea I had and wanted to comunicate. What do you people think? I have been said my writing is ok so this was a good way to practice. Hope you enjoyed it ;)
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Added: 4 years, 2 months ago
 
PrettyKitty
4 years, 2 months ago
I thought this was pretty good.

Interestingly, I was also thinking about a story like this, in which someone (in my case, Silver) acts as a sort of sex servant for Futa Blaze to help her distress from her royal duties.

And, for my personal tastes anyhow, the consensual act is appreciated.

Thank you for this good, erotic short story.
inmersion
4 years, 2 months ago
I may do a sequiel, and yes I wanted to make it a bit wholesome. I wanted it to be consensual, i don't have anything against rape fantasy but its not what I wanted for this story. What do you think would be best for a sequel? Adding more characters or should I keep it as a monogamy couple?
PrettyKitty
4 years, 2 months ago
I personally don’t have specific ideas right now (other than keeping to the theme of wholesomeness and consent, of course).


On one hand, having a monogamous relationship can help you focus on the theme of love and commitment that I feel you are going for.
That is not to say that love and commitment is exclusive only to monogamous relationships, but having just one romantic parter could help drive home the message of love (that is, these two partners only love each other so romantically - their love is a special thing shared only between themselves).
Additionally, having more characters means having to spend more time and effort in writing about these additional characters, which could mean more work for you and (as I have touched on) risks diverting attention from the theme of love.


On the other hand, having more characters can offer the opportunity for more erotic scenes, like threesomes and double teaming (I can image the POV character getting double teamed by Blaze and another Futa), and (again) this doesn’t necessarily prevent you from having a story about love.



If I had to make a choice, I’d advise you to stick with a monogamous relationship, especially if you cannot think of good ideas with polygamous relationships, so that you make it easier on yourself and help keep the story focused.

As a personal request, if you do make a sequel, could you make it a document in your gallery, so that I can save in my Favorites list? For that matter, could you do the same for this story?


Thank you again for this story, and thank you for asking me for ideas.
inmersion
4 years, 2 months ago
How do I make it a document?
PrettyKitty
4 years, 2 months ago
I believe you can upload word documents in the post section.
BootyBoi
4 years, 2 months ago
Eh...I prefer if Blaze is a sub and not a futa. I consider her sexier than Rouge.
inmersion
4 years, 2 months ago
I will make something with nonfuta Blaze in the future, I also really like her!
sharmee
4 years, 2 months ago
Honey the cat maybe? Maybe have her as an futa third wheel?
inmersion
4 years, 2 months ago
I like how you think
snoopingfox87
4 years, 2 months ago
Amazing story. Absolutely amazing.

I'd love to be able to fave a journal entry, just for this.
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