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Inspired by Dragon Mating Season a fanfic by King Spike Rules

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Everypony and Dragon are anthro ponies with hands and feet and ALL THE GIRLS have giant breasts

Cover 1: only if possible

Spike’s ultimate fantasies or…

The girls doing sexy poses in their skimpy cosplay outfits Twilight as a witch, Rarity a maid, Fluttershy a nurse, Pinkie Pie a playboy bunny, AJ a cop, Rainbow a cheerleader, Celestia a Japanese priestess, and Luna a warrior

Cover 2: only if possible

The dragon king’s harem

The girls doing sexy poses completely naked

Page 1:

Panel 1:

Spike wearing the outfit he had in Twilight’s comic stripping the teacher outfit Twilight wore as they kiss

[What, started as a mission to save Spike.]

Panel 2:

Rarity in her Dominatrix outfit using her hand to spank a tied up, naked Spike

[has become the best week for him and the mares he loves]

Panel 3:

Rainbow under a table gives Spike a titty fuck while his cock is underneath her clothes as he tries to hold back a moan, both of them are blushing

[each day a sexy new surprise]

Panel 4:

Spike licking Fluttershy as she is covered in whipped, chocolate syrup, and sprinkles

[each day a sexy new adventure]

Page 2:

Panel 1:

Spike with a remote in his hand watches as a naked, tied up like in her comic, and blindfolded Applejack with egg shaped vibrators taped to her nipples and a dildo in her pussy

[each night he showed how much he loves them]

Panel 2:

Pinkie Pie naked with her fox body paint on pole dancing while naked Spike watches on a bed

[and they all showed how much the love him]

Panel 3:

Spike naked as he fondles the butts and sucks on the breasts of Celestia and Luna at the same time

[but all good things must come to an end]

Page 3:

Panel 1:

Twilight standing alone, outside a balcony at the castle, wearing nothing but a silk robe, gazing up at the night sky

[or do they]

Twilight: (‘sigh’)

Off screen: (bit for your thoughts sugar cube)

Panel 2:

Applejack wearing nothing but a silk robe walks up to Twilight

Twilight: (oh hey Applejack, did I wake you)

Applejack: (no, too much on my mind to sleep, you)

Twilight: (same)

Panel 3:

Twilight and AJ on the balcony

Twilight: (I just can’t believe what has happened this past week)

AJ: (has been an emotional rollercoaster for sure)

Panel 4:

Twilight and AJ continue talking

AJ: (fearing for Spike’s safety, Fluttershy’s plan,)

Twilight: (all of us losing are virginity to Spike, Celestia telling us the truth, it’s just so crazy)

Page 4:

Panel 1:

The two continue to talk

Twilight: (and I feel this may all be just the beginning)

AJ: (I think you be right partner)

Panel 2:

AJ and Twilight hug each other their breasts pressed against each other

AJ: (but come what may we’ll handle it together)

Panel 3:

AJ and Twilight kiss

Panel 4:

AJ and Twilight walk back inside, a hand on the other’s ass as they do

Twilight: (let’s head back inside and rest while we can, before princess Celestia raises the sun)

AJ: (sounds like a plan)

Page 5:

Panel 1:

One of the towers of the castle barely seeing Spike and the princess from the window laying naked in bed

Panel 2:

Spike sandwiched between Celestia and Luna as they cuddle close to him, his head between their breasts, all three are a sleep as a knocking sound is heard in the background

Off screen: (your majesties)

Panel 3:

Celestia wakes up and sits up

Celestia: (yes)

From the door: (sorry your highness, nut it is time for you to raise the sun and for Princess Luna to lower the moon)

Celestia: (thank you we shall do so now)

Panel 4:

Celestia gently tries to wake Luna up

Celestia: (Luna, it is time to lower the moon)

Page 6:

Panel 1:

Celestia gently giggles as Luna snuggles closer to Spike pressing his head further against her breasts

Celestia: (alright I get it; I’ll go do it myself, you little faker)

Panel 2:

Celestia turns around and walks off not noticing Luna opening one eye and playfully sticks out her tongue

Panel 3:

Celestia lowers the moon and raises the sun not noticing Luna coming up behind her

Panel 4:

Luna hugs Celestia from behind

Luna: (good morning sister)

Celestia: (good morning)

Page 7:

Panel 1:

Celestia sighs sadly as Luna looks happy

Luna: (last night so wonderful)

Celestia: (yes it was)

Panel 2:

Luna smiles as Celestia continues to be sad

Luna: (what’s wrong Celestia?)

Celestia: (I feel bad cause in a way we accidently used Spike to fulfill our sexual fantasies and he hasn’t had a chance to all week)

Luna: (funny you should mention that)

Panel 3:

Luna whispers in a shocked Luna’s ear both of them are blushing

Panel 4:

Luna gleefully giggles as Celestia is dumbfounded both of them blushing

Celestia: (w-we, duh we, um…)

Page 8:

Panel 1:
Celestia and Luna excitedly use their magic

Celestia: (we have to get to Twilight and the other before Spike wakes up)

Panel 2:

Twilight and the other in a lesbian orgy as Luna and Celestia teleport into the room

Celestia: (girls sorry to interrupt but we need your help)

Panel 3:

The girls a bit worried as Luna calms them down

Twilight: (what’s wrong princess)

Rarity: (has anything happened to Spikey-wikey)

Luna: (no, no everything is fine believe me)

Panel 4:

Celestia talks to the others as they get excited

Celestia: (we just found out how to give Spike the best day of his life, and need help)

Twilight: (how are we going to do that?)

Page 9:

Panel 1:

The girls wearing silk robes rummaging through racks of clothes

[Moments later]

AJ: (wow, I’m impressed Rarity. All these cosplay outfits in such a short time)

Rarity: (thank you applejack, I must admit even I’m impressed how fast I did these.)

Luna: (yes these are perfect and incredibly sexy)

Panel 2:

Celestia talks as Rarity and Twilight start stripping off their robes

Celestia: (yes they are, now we must hurry and get dressed before our man wakes up)

Twilight: (Trust us we are ready princess Celestia)

Rarity: (but we should let Spikey-wikey rest a bit more)

Panel 3:

The robes fall by Twilight and Rarity’s feet

Off screen: (after all)

Page 10:

Panel 1:

Twilight wearing a sexy skimpy witch costume and Rarity wearing a sexy skimpy French maid costume

Twilight: (that dragon won’t be getting any sleep tonight)

Viewed: 295 times
Added: 3 years, 7 months ago
 
MrCyberwolf
3 years, 7 months ago
Looks pretty interesting.

I did notice at least one mistake. Twilight says  Are instead of Our in the line "all of us losing are virginity to Spike"
rdphoenix07
3 years, 7 months ago
So this will be the long awaited orgy suggested back in Rainbow Dash's story? If so, then I'm really looking forward to it.
Longnight
3 years, 7 months ago
Can't wait to see how this plays out. maybe Spike is king for a day and has his own harem of sexy slaves. Also when you wrote about Luna whispering in Celestia's ear. You wrote Luna whispers into LUNA'S ear and not Celestia's.
Kaijufan97
3 years, 7 months ago
Is Spike going to spank the girls later in the comic?
aidenolney
3 years, 7 months ago
I love it, can't wait until the next part of the script
(But some words were spelled incorrectly maybe fix that.)
cheftrim29
3 years, 7 months ago
Which ones please my word program has auto correct so I may miss it
aidenolney
3 years, 7 months ago
Like *are* it should have been *our* and maybe other words that I forgot where and what they are.
RawAxis
3 years, 7 months ago
Looks really hot! I been waiting on a big orgy for a while :D

So is this like a big conclusion to your mlp comics?
marinus18
3 years, 6 months ago
I haven't been able to find that fanfic anywhere. Where did you find it?
cheftrim29
3 years, 6 months ago
marinus18
3 years, 6 months ago
thank you. I did try searching for it but I didn't think it would be there since fanfiction usually doesn't have porn.
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