I like it. It's not bad at all. The only thing that gets me, and I'm not sure it was your intent, is the beginning. It starts out really low, and yeah, that's fine, but it stays really low for quite a while. That's the only qualm I have about it. Like...maybe a stronger fade-in, to go from really low, to having it have a bit more...oomph up to about 0:18 or 0:23, instead of coming in at full force half-a-minute into the song.
I'm no composer though, so I'm just throwing out there what I think. Aside from that though, I like it.
I like it. It's not bad at all. The only thing that gets me, and I'm not sure it was your intent, is
