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KJwulf

(Watchers please read!) Looking for feedback!

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I've just finished working on the last chapter of my "Looking After the Boys" short series and I'm just starting to edit it. The first two chapters brought in a considerable amount of new watchers, which actually surprised me. It excited me to know that other people liked what I produced so much they felt I was worth watching, which was something I haven't felt in a long time. With the end of the series though where do I go from here? I want to keep everyone's interest and have them look forward to something new from me in their submission lists as opposed to just sporadic journals of me complaining about something. Lately I've been writing a bunch of short stories lately as opposed to longer installments. I found that shorter one-offers let me express myself better so I can continuously create new characters, situations and problems.

There have been several people that have expressed their interest in me continuing my original series involving Kellan and Dante. While I want to eventually continue that story, for the time being I want to continue on shorter stories. What I would really like is to be able to do in the future is sell commissions to those interested in getting a story from me. Now, I love to write, I really do. It's one of the few things that make me truly happy to do, and I want to keep writing. However right now I feel like I am 1. Not good enough to charge for anything I produce and 2. That I don't have enough material to actually warrant me selling anything and 3. It takes me forever to produce anything I find is of worth to share. I am actively working on on all of these points, but I would like to hear any ideas or feedback from my watchers. What about my writing style is appealing to you? Are the sex scenes more interesting than any other plot or subject matters present? Are the sex scenes what sell my stories or the over arching story? Are the characters interesting or are they just tools to carry the plot along? I really want to improve my craft and you can all help me by just telling me what you think of my work currently.

Please, any feedback is greatly appreciated! Thank you for reading!  
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Added: 9 years, 9 months ago
 
Calmunk
9 years, 9 months ago
Your characters are relatable and your overall story is good. You find a great way to mix the loving in with the plot. Anybody can write dirty. Your involving methods deliver so much more for me as a watcher.
KJwulf
9 years, 9 months ago
I try my best with my characters to make them likable and not just devices to carry out sex. That being said i don't always enjoy putting them in sexual situations but those are the situations people tend to search for the most. Where do you feel like I can improve?
Calmunk
9 years, 9 months ago
Not sure where you can improve yet, you do a great job. I will provide critiques of your work as you post them.
Thaddeus
3 years, 4 months ago
Kj, I read these stories about two years ago, and was only just now startled to find that I had not watched you then.  I've remedied this situation.  I'm also inclined to suggest, that if you are still looking for feedback for your stories, that I know just the place!  I started it myself well, about two years ago, actually, and it's grown into a popular place for authors of all skill levels in the furry community to create and to workshop.  Whether or not you join, I'm happy to give you feed back the four stories I have read('Looking After the Boys', though I should probably reread them first), if you tell me what specifically you want feedback on.
KJwulf
3 years, 4 months ago
Well, thank you for the watch! I gotta admit I didn't know I even still had this journal up lol. That sounds interesting though! Unfortunately I don't write much anymore nowadays, but if I ever get back into it I'll have to look into that!
Thaddeus
3 years, 4 months ago
Whether or not you write regularly is of no consequence to me.  If you do enjoy the craft when you engage it, or just want to hang out with other writers, you are welcome.  Hell, even if you swore off writing entirely, you'd still be welcome, so long as you still held an appreciation for it and/or passion for reading.  
I shall keep up my hope that you do join, now or in the future.  And I should read more of your work too, if I can find the time...
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