In an unknown location, somewhere in the US, there is a top-secret research and science facility, where the government conducts top secret experiments, the facility is heavily guarded 24/7.
One of the thousands of experiments conducted in the facility, known simply as “Subject J”, has the appearance of harmless looking light blue goo, however, the scientists, through inhuman experiments, such as high voltage electro shocks, managed to bring the pile of lifeless glob to life. By “feeding” the goo with chemicals and electro shocks, torturing IT over months and years, they gave it human-like intelligence, the ability to shape shift and morph into humans, animals, objects, plants and even give it the ability to talk. “Subject J” also has the ability to solidify whatever form it takes, causing it to appear as a real animal, human, plant or object, in this solid state, the “thing” is resistant towards liquids, like water, preventing it from simply dissolving. The only goal of this experiment is to create a powerful weapon, to the scientists and the government, “Subject J” is nothing more than a “tool” to help them achieve their goals. All though the blue pile of living goo has neither ears nor eyes, it is able to see and hear everything that is going on, it is even able to feel pain, causing it to scream and screech in agony every time those evil humans “feed” the electricity into it.
It tried to plead with the humans, to let it go, to stop what they were doing to it, but its pleas landed on deaf ears. All this torture, suffering and pain led to “Subject J”, hating humans and see all humans as evil beings, though IT refuses to let the tiny spark of “hope” it had left, that there just has to be some human out there, that isn’t evil, go. “Subject J” knew that none of the humans in the facility were good, and it KNEW it just had to somehow get out of there, and so the living goo with human intelligence begins plotting its escape, until one day it got the chance.
(I hope you don't mind that I used Zac as reference for my own character)
Anyway... let me know down in the comments what you guys think of the intro:
- is it good enough? - is something missing (like more information about the main character? Shoulde there be more detailed background information?) - Any thoughts/ideas you might have how this series could continue are welcome