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FEEDBACK NEEDED (please?)
The gang has arrived at the catfish pond...

MIMI: "You'll catch me a fish, won't you, Gene?"

GENE: "Get your own, Mimi"

MIMI (matter-of-factly): "Then I guess I won't have time to build the cooking fire"

MUBBA (from afar): "I'll get you one, Mimi!"

MIMI: "Why thank you, Mubba---you're such a genetleman!"

TASLI (knowingly; to Mubba): "You don't know how to catch catfish, do you?"

MUBBA: "No"

TASLI: "The first step is to take off that stupid helmet!"

MUBBA: But---I need it!"

D:

GENE: "Why? Are you hiding something under there?"

TASLI: "My guess is a brain, but is it of the bird or the pea variety?"

MUBBA: "I need something 'tween my head and the world"

*a pine cone falls on Mubba's head*

MUBBA: "Case and point"

*Gene and Tasli exchange glances* (show Gene shrugging)

TASLI: "Whatever---it won't save you from the monster catfish, anyway"

MUBBA: "Monster catfish!?"

Of course, Mubba's helmet is a bit more complicated than a mere shell, but that's for another day.

Pennies, long tails and laser pointers---where could all this be leading? We'll find out (eventually) when I draw the next comic!

Anyway, I'm usually asked when the next page will be coming out. The answer is I don't always know---just depends on when I prefer drawing Gene and Tasli instead of ACO.
I realize ACO isn't my most popular subject on InkBunny, but it is elsewhere (DA and FA) ...and ACO is also my preference; comics and quickies are bonus material. ^^

TASLI: "That's she, there"

TASLI: "She's the biggest and the best! And some say impossible to catch!"

MUBBA (determined): "But we can, together---for Mimi, right?"

GENE: "Pfft! No! That catfish is too big. Besides, 'we' aren't catching Mimi anything ---YOU are!"

TASLI (nudging Mubba hard): "And you better not disappoint!"

MUBBA (frustrated): "Well what do I do?"

GENE (demonstrating): "Just stick your arm in a catfish burrow. The fish'll bite, and you pull it out. Simple!"

MUBBA: "I don't want it to bite me!"

GENE: "It won't hurt too bad; they don't have teeth. We've done it lots!"

TASLI: "Don't bother, Gene. He's scared!"

MUBBA (angry): "If you were nicer to me, Tasli, I'd be less afraid! I don't trust you not to trick me, or to help if I needed it!"

TASLI: "I'm just calling out your wimpiness---if you don't like it, prove me wrong!"

GENE (calling; to Tasli): "Tasli!"

*Tasli takes the fish caught by Gene, to put it in the cooler*

*Gene waves to Mubba, to join him in the water*

TASLI (to Mubba): "Your go, Mubba!"

MUBBA: "I don't want my shorts to get wet---and what about that giant fish, there!?"

TASLI (annoyed): "See? That's why no one likes you, Mubba"

GENE (to Mubba): "She doesn't come this close to the bank; the water's not deep enough here. Anyway, it's Mimi you need to worry about!"

*frustrated, Mubba jams a hand into his pocket; Mubba feels the laser pointer and removes it; looking at the laser pointer gives Mubba an idea*

*Mubba points the laser at the water, just ahead of the monster catfish

The catfish gives chase to the laser. Mubba turns the laser off*

MUBBA (to self): "She went for it!"

MUBBA (to Tasli): "You'd like me if I caught that big fish, wouldn't you, Tasli!?"

TASLI: "I won't waste my mind on that question---as it is, you won't even get wet"

*Gene appears, and shakes himself dry next to Mubba*

WATCHER: "It just happened to notice how Mubba stands out against the other three in the middle panel, as he seems to be the only one with non white fur.
He´s special"

...You know, I didn't consider any kind of racist angle until recently (long after this comment was made). But now that I've thought about it, I can see how some can perceive it/my characters that way ...either way, 'I' can't unsee it now. :P

Just to clarify, I'm not racist and neither are my characters. I've made it clear Tasli's dislike of Mubba stems from Mubba ratting on he and Gene---it has nothing to do with anyone's color.

WATCHER: "The more of these come out, the less i'm liking Tsali. He's so mean! What the heck, dude? Cut the kid a break!"

WATCHER: "If you wanted to make me not like Tasli and Gene and like Mubba instead you're succeeding"

This has been a fairly universal perspective, and ...I get it. ^^

I went a bit too far with the teasing of Mubba. So, I'm ending this story here and now---I want to continue making Gene and Tasli comics because I'm too lazy to create new characters (Timmy is too risque, and there isn't much interest in BtrfyFx/Fix). So I don't want Gene and Tasli to be hated or cancelled. :P

Anyway...

There are two endings for this: the ending I'm giving it now, and the ending the comic was going to have. I'll describe both. :3

Mubba asks Gene if it's true that the water in the fishing area is too shallow for the monster fish. Gene confirms.
Mubba suggests Gene closes his eyes as he's about to try something. Gene complies (kinda).

Mubba uses the laser pointer to entice the monster fish. The fish is hypnotized with greed, and goes after the light, even into the shallow water.

Tasli narrowly avoids being eaten by the fish (Mubba moved the light in Tasli's direction).

The three cut up the fish and bring their catch to Mimi. The four enjoy a meal together, with Gene and Tasli having a new respect for Mubba ("he's pretty smart---we should want him on our side!").

The end.

Original ending.

Pretty much the same, except Tasli is caught by the fish. Gene and Mubba work to try to free Tasli.
Unsuccessful, Mubba gives Gene the laser pointer, telling Gene to point it at his tail. Gene complies, unsure what Mubba plans to do.
The fish sees the light shining on Mubba's wagging tail. The fish releases Tasli and catches Mubba's tail.

Mubba, consequently, loses much of his tail fur to the monster fish, but Tasli is saved because of it.
The monster fish manages to shimmy its way backward, into the deeper water. The fish, too, escapes death.

Mubba laments that he failed to catch the fish, but Gene and Tasli have only good to say to him (the fish 'could' have been caught---Mubba's idea was ingenious, and he gave his tail to save Tasli's life, despite all Tasli had said to him).
Also, Mubba would have found a tiny catfish in his helmet, to give to Mimi. ^^

On a side note, Mimi would have had something to say about the tail, given Mubba's remark at the railroad track. ^^

That's about it. ^^

I'll be deleting this comic in its entirety from FA and DA, but I will leave it on IB (because IB gets all my junk art anyway).

Anyway... my next project will be better than this (I hope!).

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Published: 3 years, 6 months ago
Rating: General

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SageOfShadow
3 years, 6 months ago
So, that is the next part after the laser panel ?
Also, nice frog !
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 6 months ago
Yes (the comic is being uploaded in sections).

Thx! :3
SageOfShadow
3 years, 5 months ago
*Boink* XD

Oooh, is it time for the camping horror story ? OwO
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Oh, this monster catfish is quite real, and we'll be seeing it soon! :o
SageOfShadow
3 years, 5 months ago
Wait a sec ... aren't all camping horror story true ? DID PEOPLE LIE TO ME ? XD
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Muhaha! You'll never know!
SageOfShadow
3 years, 5 months ago
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH XD
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
That's what many (secretly!) say when they see my art! XD
erik1950
3 years, 6 months ago
When does the next part comes out?
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 6 months ago
Whenever I draw it. ^^

I have ACOs to make as well ...and some watchers are wondering where Fix the Fox is. ^^
erik1950
3 years, 6 months ago
Well i cant wait ^^
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 6 months ago
<3 I'm glad you're enjoying this <3
erik1950
3 years, 5 months ago
Tasli if you stay such a jerk then i fear i have no other choice then give you a good spanking understood?
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Oh my!
erik1950
3 years, 5 months ago
Benjamin:Tasli I warned you I don't have a choice.... *Lays Tasli over his knees and giving him a good spanking*
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
MUHAHA!
erik1950
3 years, 5 months ago
HeHe ^w^
Zivrshka
3 years, 6 months ago
I see mimi is starting to come into her own as a character. In fact the whole cast is developing in this long form. I like where this is going.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 6 months ago
I'm glad you like. :3
nelson88
3 years, 6 months ago
Nice comic!^^
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 6 months ago
Thx! :3
Zivrshka
3 years, 6 months ago
Is it me or is Mimi suddenly a bit tom boyish.
Zivrshka
3 years, 6 months ago
The frog is not amused ...
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 6 months ago
She's in the woods, about to make a fire and cook fish---she wasn't going to wear her sundress for this. ^^

Mimi is quite girly, despite the LL Bean-type shirt she's wearing here. :3
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 6 months ago
<3
ShiftyGuy1994
3 years, 6 months ago
Oh here we go, the comic continues :3 Nice job as always so far lol
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 6 months ago
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
MUBBA (angry): "If you were nicer to me, Tasli, I'd be less afraid! I don't trust you not to trick me, or to help if I needed it!"

yeah Mubba you tell em ... :p
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Even Mubba has his limits. :3
SageOfShadow
3 years, 5 months ago
Damn, that kid is smart ! Through i think it is half true...i think tasli will trick him BUT help him if he is in some real danger ^^
Also, gene faces are awesome ^^
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Thx ever so! <3
SageOfShadow
3 years, 5 months ago
Why am i hearing some kind of gear turning noise suddenly ? XD.... i am ashamed that i don't remember the right expression to say that ^^'

Another nice page ^^
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
It's, "(one's) wheels/gears are turning", so you pretty much had it right! :D

Mubba has an idea indeed, but will it work? The monster is a serious catfish---hopefully, Mubba isn't planning to trick or capture it... but of course, he wants Tasli's respect. We'll find out eventually! :o
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
(Page 5) If you wanted to make me not like Tasli and Gene and like Mubba instead you're succeeding. Those two are being so mean. Meanwhile Mubba has become quite the cute character as of late. I must admit I like the view of Tasli's back from panel 5 though.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
I'm realizing I've overdone it, which contributes to my present disinterest in the comic. XD
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
Maybe that can be part of the story arc. Maybe by the end they learn to appreciate Mubba more and learn that constantly having to one up everyone can make life no fun. Maybe Mubba and Mimi find a way to make fun of Tasli and Gene and then they can see what its like to constantly get nitpicked at.

Of course its your comic, and you have to do whatever it is you're going to do. This is just a suggestion for how to bring it full circle.
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
And it makes me a little sad because I really want to like Tasli and Gene, but it does seem like they are starting to just be bullies. Unfortunately like many hapless kids, Mubba wants friends so bad (or is so naive) that he sticks around and takes the abuse rather than the more sensible thing of looking for other people to hang out with.

I for one took the second path even if it could be the lonely one. Ive seen too many cases of the kid who laughs at himself being made fun of and just becomes the butt monkey of the group. That or they put up such a flimsy defense like "shut up". Yeah, you know they arent really there for anything other than being made fun of.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Tasli holds grudges. It'll end soon. :3
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
Are you saying the comic would continue? I still would like to see how this story turns out.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
I'm ending it today, actually. ^^
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
Okay. Im curious to see what your conclusion will be. I just hope you're not ending it prematurely on account of not liking how it turned out.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
I am, but that's how it goes. The art's done and all, just waiting until I can upload it. ^^
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
Awwww. Oh well. Its still the most interesting and long running comic of yours to date. I hope you continue with this format for your ocs. Would love to see this series expanded.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
I'm going to make a VERY weak attempt at MT next.
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
The story I described to you, with Didymus, Roland, etc.
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
Ah Maya's Tears, right?
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Maia's Tears, yes.
SageOfShadow
3 years, 5 months ago
Love the part with tasli being chased by the fish XD
The last scene look nice too ^^


Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaand, it's DONE ! At least you have make it to the end .... sort of .... XP
Hope your next project will entertain you even more ^^
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Thx :3
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
Aw. Tasli and Mubba in the last panel together is cute. Guess Mubba finally managed to gain some respect from Tasli :p
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
<3
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
And I see at least Tasli got some comuppance in the end.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Question is whether Mubba will ever appear in a comic again. I kinda feel he's run his course, but what do I know?

A watcher wants to see Tasli and Pinky get together ...which I find interesting (the fact Pinky has a fan). ^^
SageOfShadow
3 years, 5 months ago
If that really is his last appearance, *poke the antenna one last time* XP
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
I still think that helmet is part of Mubba's head. You'll note there are no straps holding it down. ;)
SageOfShadow
3 years, 5 months ago
Oh, it is on purpose ? Not the artist being lazy ? >;3
Joke aside, i have not even see or though about them being absent XD
Now i wanna see how good it is stuck on his head....O_o
Through i don't think it is stuck that much...he wouldn't have the reflex to grab it if it couldn't fall if so... ^^
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
These are just silly characters, friend. :3
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
Well you seem to be garnering a fandom for them anyway ...
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
The furry community seems desperate for content. One would think COVID would have kept everyone inside, freeing them up to make art. :P
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
" IceAgeChippies wrote:
The furry community seems desperate for content. One would think COVID would have kept everyone inside, freeing them up to make art. :P


My theory is that furries are starved for long form content. Most furry content is either single illustrations, or one-off comics. If there are multiple parts these are typically unplanned sequels rather than multiple parts in a mini-series. I don't see too many people trying to create persistent characters and worlds with on-going storylines, although in fairness I know it's a lot of work. I think part of the problem is that there doesn't seem to be much furry content in media these days. So we don't have anything from the mainstream producing long form stories. So I think there is a vacancy for this type of story driven content. I think you and Pandapaco are good examples of how furries flock to this kind of content even if it contains no explicit sexual content whatsoever. Besides there is already a TON of that kind of content on this site, there is no shortage of quick fixes if that's what you are looking for. But I think people also want to get more invested in characters and world building. You can have both, and they can even overlap in the same work, but they don't have to. Anyway that's why I think you are popular despite not following a lot of the standard practices around here.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
I thoiught it was because I spammed people with hearts. :o

XD Anyway, I need to come up with a format for Maia's Tears. There is no way on God's earth I can fully illustrate it---this thing would be 400+ pages (I'm not joking---what I have written of this sits in a dust-covered stack between my desk and my CD stand; it's a lot of stuff)! :p

I'm thinking of illustrating it like I did Fix's story: https://inkbunny.net/s/2096757

Do you think that'd fly?
Zivrshka
3 years, 4 months ago
So I think I basically addressed everything on your "FEEDBACK NEEDED" submission.

I just wanted to add, that I neglected to mention that there is one type of long form content I've seen on this site. People have written long novels but the catch is there is almost no images to go by except for maybe a cover page. I don't know how popular these works are or what their contents are, but I'm going to guess, as a general rule, that it's harder to get people invested in a written story here versus art and comics. Sure it might work on a fan fiction site, but that's probably because people are already familar with the properties and can imagine anything going on in the fan fiction pretty well. I've enjoyed reading fan fiction from time to time (although most of it is not terribly good and you have to search quite a bit to find the good stuff). I have found it harder to get invested in the written content here.

Given that, and the fact that you already complain most watchers don't read your description, if you were to just do a text dump of Maia's Tears it would probably not get much attention (I'd probably read it though as I'm already interested). However if you combine it with images like you are planning, especially more than a single cover image for the whole story, then I think it could be successful despite not being a full fledged comic.

When I was talking about the furry community being starved for long form content I was mostly thinking about on-going comic series, not furry novels. As a lot of the appeal of furrydom is visual I think the novels are a tougher sell. The main reason for their existence is your current dilemma. Given the amount of work for a comic series it is just easier and more practical to present the story in written form. In fact if you have a story to tell and no budget or means to present that story as say a movie, or tv show, or comic book, there is always writing as the cheapest and simplest fall back way to putting it out there.
SageOfShadow
3 years, 5 months ago
yeah, but i like overthinking things anyway XP
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
Aw man, and just when I was starting to like him as a main cast member.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
^^
Zivrshka
3 years, 5 months ago
Btw the art is still pretty good. Like Tasli getting chased by the fish, Gene in the first panel looks good, and the last panel is nice.
IceAgeChippies
3 years, 5 months ago
Thx1 :3
MviluUatusun
11 months ago
LOL.  C'mon, Mubba.  Are you telling me a raccoon doesn't know about cooning for catfish?
IceAgeChippies
11 months ago
lol
MviluUatusun
11 months ago
One thing I know for sure about cooning for catfish is that it's VERY dangerous.  You don't know how big that catfish is and a 25 lb. catfish is strong enough to drown a person.  I watched a TV show and a guy told a story about how one almost drowned him.  Of course, he guessed that one weighed well over 100 lbs.
IceAgeChippies
11 months ago
Oh so powerful! D:
MviluUatusun
11 months ago
Yeah.  They're supposed to be solid muscle.
IceAgeChippies
11 months ago
Well, in the story, there was a giant catfish, so the cubs DID have something to fear, lurking in the mud. :3
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