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[Short story - humour] Liftoff!

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liftoff.doc
Keywords female 1089962, mouse 54489, rocket 1345, humour 437, launch 34
Liftoff!
A short cartoon in words
By Dennis M. Falk
Released under a Creative Commons attribute (any version): BY-NC-SA
3 April 2016


On a warm Spring day, Amy was sitting in the park on a bench, doing nothing but eating a peanut butter sandwich-- A favourite of many mice.

*pfrrrrrp!*

*squeek?*, a surprised Amy squeeked, as clouds of smoke began to billow out.

ENGINE START, T MINUS 10 SECNDS AND COUNTING!

*RUMBLE!*

"Uh-oh..."

THE LAUNCH PAD IS CLEAR-- Birds, fearing for their safety, fly a safe distance away- WE HAVE IGNITION! T MINUS 5... 4... 3...

*VROOOOOOOM!*

...2... 1....

LIFTOFF! WE HAVE LIFTOFF!


Bright rocket-like flames lift the mouse up and off the bench--

*SQUEEEEEEK!!*

The mouse shoots up into the air with a firey flame trailing.

...AND THE MOUS-1 HAS LAUNCHED ON A MISSION TO UNCHARTED SPACE IN SEARCH OF CHEESY ADVENTURE!

*SQUEEEEEEEEEEE----------.............!*

Amy disappears into the sky.....

The end? *frrrp!*
 
 
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by dmfalk
[Gift] "A Very Merry Unbirthday!"
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[Request] Feral Amy
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[Story - Nanofiction] The Warrior Squirrels of the Sahara
[Picofiction] A really, really short story!
What's this?? A new short story from me??? :o

Random thought from this morning, featuring everyone's favourite mousie... ;)

d.m.f.

Keywords
female 1,089,962, mouse 54,489, rocket 1,345, humour 437, launch 34
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Type: Writing - Document
Published: 8 years, 12 months ago
Rating: General

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CyberCornEntropic
8 years, 12 months ago
Look out for that bowl of petunias on the way up! :o
dmfalk
8 years, 12 months ago
"Oh, no! Not again!" ;D

d.m.f.
CyberCornEntropic
8 years, 12 months ago
She really shouldn't sit under a rocket-tree, you know. :p
Orgunis
8 years, 12 months ago
Cheesy avdentures heh, well the first step gotta be on the moon (sarcasm)cuz everyone knows the moon made of cheese o3o(sarcasm)
CyberCornEntropic
8 years, 12 months ago
Only the near side. :p  It's all green cheesy because shenanigans on Earth make the Moon queasy. :p  Fortunately, most of the far side is made of honey, perfect for newlyweds. :p
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