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Kazekai

Tale of a Misfit (story)

Finally can post on FictionPress.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2971689/1/Mystichean_Chr...

Go there to read it.

It's basically the story of two people with very similar struggles but very different everything else, finding out as the story goes just how much in common they actually have. No, it's not a love-story, I hate those, it's more like a brother-sister kind of thing. Lots of adventure and fantasy elements.

Seriously, I've been trying to get people to look at this for DAYS. The old story will be removed from here, since it's not porn and therefore nobody will read it, and I'd very much appreciate some feedback on it!

I'm not asking you to praise it, I just want to know what people think of it so I can improve it, and I'd like it very much if people could point out grammar errors and shit that I can't be assed to go back and do myself. You'd be doing me a huge favor if you'd read this, I'm serious about it, I'm not just going to abandon it like everything else I do! >.<

And I'm really fucking tired of people going deaf when I bring this up to them. You can't take five minutes to read something for me? Really? After all the shit that I do for some of you? Damn ingrates.

Not that I expect people to actually read this, since nobody reads any of my journals that pertain to shit that I care about. It's like it's in human nature to instantly make yourself scarce when an alleged friend needs you. >_>
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Added: 7 years ago
 
MaDrow
7 years ago
Read~

Nice story concept~
Some spelling errors (eg. chamger )
I recommend to use more indention or extra whitespace to express the begin and end of the paragraph.

It's because i lack the time to read complete stories, |=(xC
But i would like that you continue to write on this story~ |=(:3
Kazekai
7 years ago
I appreciate that you actually replied... I have been having a hell of a time finding anyone to read this. I'd appreciate it if you could give me the sentence the spelling errors are in so I can search it and not have to re-read the whole thing. That was partly why I wanted to show it to other people.

edit - err, actually I found most of them, I'll fix the story. Thanks.

This makes me insanely happy, now I feel like I can work on the next chapter. :D
MaDrow
7 years ago
*blushes* You're welcome ~ |=(:\\3
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