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OMG! Miryam can do ice!! D=

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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 8 years, 5 months ago
Rating: General

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fuuuuuuu
8 years, 5 months ago
aww xD i was thining it was water
Giru
8 years, 5 months ago
Well, ice is technically water, so... XD
fuuuuuuu
8 years, 5 months ago
yeah but can she control water too xD or only in it's solid form? :0
Giru
8 years, 5 months ago
She freezes the water first and then control it. Like if she only could control the water molecules.
fuuuuuuu
8 years, 5 months ago
oki doki ^^
Questionable
8 years, 4 months ago
Out of curiosity, how many others are helping you with this comic?
Giru
8 years, 4 months ago
Nobody, I'm working on this on my own.
Questionable
8 years, 4 months ago
Ever thought of having a beta reader or someone to brainstorm with? it could help.
Giru
8 years, 4 months ago
I brainstorm myself =P. Music is mostly my inspiration.
Of course I could discuss stuff with friends, but as the comic is not developed enough, they are hardly interested. So I keep working with what I have.
Questionable
8 years, 4 months ago
Music is my insperation too. If you need help with something id love to help. I helped two others so far.
Giru
8 years, 4 months ago
Well if you see any issue, info missing or how the story could continue, any suggestion is welcome and appreciated~
Questionable
8 years, 4 months ago
Well to be honest, in the first 22 pages I noticed there were maybe spelling errors and some of the words were together. I don't have the best memory. Ill let you know if I get any ideas for the story continue. ;)

By the way. Some of the dialoge could have been phrased differently. But that's just my oppinion.
Giru
8 years, 4 months ago
Spelling mistakes? Really? I rewrote the whole thing before uploading it to Inkbunny. I mean, its true that I could have written the dialogue in some other way but I thought everything was correct.

Well, english is not my native language, mistakes happen. I shall revise it soon. Thanks for telling =P
Questionable
8 years, 4 months ago
Sorry. I don't think there were any spelling errors. Opps my bad. I hadn't slept yet, tired.

I had a feeling english wasn't your first language. I was kinda afraid you'd take offence if I asked.

Giru
8 years, 4 months ago
Don't worry, I will revise it anyway just in case.

Its ok, I don't get offended with such nonsense =P
Questionable
8 years, 4 months ago
Can you tell me what revise means? I googled it (and as always when I use it to define something) but I didn't understand it. :(
Giru
8 years, 4 months ago
Revise is to check your work looking for mistakes or stuff to improve it. Basically.
Questionable
8 years, 4 months ago
That makes more sense. Tomorrow when I'm not sleepy do you want me to message you my version of the dialoge and my oppinions? Id do it but that's all up to you. :)
Giru
8 years, 4 months ago
Sure! by private message please. I don't want this comment section to overflow XD
Questionable
8 years, 4 months ago
Lol, ok. Is it ok if I friend you? Its so I don't forget your name and spend hours looking Through the 100 people I'm watching and their posts.
Giru
8 years, 4 months ago
Sure =P
Questionable
8 years, 4 months ago
Alright. We' ll talk again tomorrow. Ima watch your youtube videos. I dont understand what your saying in them but im enjoying them so far. ;P
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