Sorry it takes long time to think of an argument between Sonic and Shadow. The fireplace isn't so easy to draw the direction and colouring. I tried my best to write that argument scene between those two. Boy, Sonic sure shivers from the cold after he fell into the lake. And I don't know what happened next to write and draw. And I don't even know what Shadow would say in the next page.
Well, that would depend largely on how Shadow's personality is meant to come across from this point forward, and it will also retroactively paint his actions before this page.
On one hand, you could argue that as a cave-dwelling werehog, he's just not aware of societal norms and basic empathy. He didn't do it to be a bad guy, he did it because it's what he wanted, and it just never occurred to him on any level that it might not be what SONIC wanted. He might not even view it as rape, just... mating. And after finding out that his actions were wrong (and more importantly, WHY they were wrong), he could make a sincere effort to change and fix his relationship with Sonic, which is already off on one of the worst starts it possibly could be.
On the other hand, he could in fact be fully aware of what he's doing and the implications. He's simply selfish and doesn't care about the feelings of others -- he wants a mate, he wants pups, and Sonic can provide both whether he wants to or not. The fact that he knows how to read and seems to know the location of settlements and lone houses in and near his forest would imply that he knows at least something about the society around him, it's just a matter of if the norms of that society matter to him compared to his own lust. Sonic could very well continue to be his unwilling sex slave.
Like I said, it really depends on what kind of a character you want Shadow to be moving forward. Is he a sensitive type who simply acts impulsively and carelessly, or is he a selfish type who gets what he wants regardless of the effect it has on others? Once you figure this out, the dialogue (and by extension the argument) should be able to flow easier.
Well, that would depend largely on how Shadow's personality is meant to come across from this point
You got the point. But it sure is hard to write the dialogues of reasons and reactions. Of course, Shadow really doesn't know what he's doing, and he would find out why is it wrong to rape, force and kidnapping. It hurts feelings.
You got the point. But it sure is hard to write the dialogues of reasons and reactions. Of course, S
And another thing, it takes a lot of time to think of a story, comic or what happens next. All I have to do is just be patient to work with that comic. Some people like my comics like this comic.
And another thing, it takes a lot of time to think of a story, comic or what happens next. All I hav
Believe me, I absolutely get this. I'm currently sitting on two stories because I can't stop plotting and re-plotting the events of the first couple of chapters, not to mention character details. I know all too well the pain of sitting awake at night wondering "What needs to happen?"
My Inkbunny gallery is actually pretty barren compared to what I have on Furaffinity. In addition to a completed novel-length tale, I've got more than too many stories that I've given up on ever continuing simply because I started them too soon without planning things out properly.
So I absolutely get why it takes a while between pages. By all means, take your time, don't rush it, and make sure everything is right. :)
Believe me, I absolutely get this. I'm currently sitting on two stories because I can't stop plottin
