You might not be happy with this page but I certainly find it satisfying. I have always enjoyed this bit where a character mysteriously appears next to another character on a bench after a passing vehicle. As with before, the dark color scheme is really what makes this comic distinctive and somewhat ironically makes this page 'pop.' The fact that you made Eddie Stripesocks (is that really her surname?) Pitch black to the otherwise greyscale surroundings really helps her stand out along with the shininess of her overall color scheme. It is clear that this character is going to have some significance. I am trying to write this from the perspective of the first time reader. I really like the character design as well. Briefly appearing as it may be. It definitely breaks the mold compared to many other comics, which again, wear their anime influences on their sleeve. The letter is a very nice touch as well, setting up the story.
You might not be happy with this page but I certainly find it satisfying. I have always enjoyed this