Okay, first of all: Awesome! This work has such a nice atmosphere.
Little crittique tho: 1) mind the shading on the smoke (from the hat) 2) position of firing hand to revolver: the barrel direction looks like its a top-break loaded gun(opens beween the sight and the hammer, swings the barrel down). Obviously tho, you made it a swing-out loader (cylinder swings out sideways parralel to the barrel). now to maintain this hand position while the barrel pointing down like in this pic, the grip would be angled less than 90°, so it would look like a "J" (if you point the barrel up). ...if that makes any sense xD
Multible ways to fix that last one. either: - Change the hand position: turn the hand forward, middle- and ringfinger moving back, if not out of sight, thumb and wrist get more obvious or: - change his holding on the grip: loose holding with half-opened hand, thumb barely over the end of the grip, grip becomes visible under thumb (might be the easiest fix) - change the gun to a top-break loaded one (cannot recomend this one, needs repositioning of lots of stuff)
just my 2 cents as a gun enthusiast :D Love AirBlade
Okay, first of all: Awesome! This work has such a nice atmosphere. Little crittique tho: 1) mind th
