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Published: 6 years, 11 months ago

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LeydenTheWolf

6 years, 11 months ago

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Edited 6 years, 11 months ago by Owner

Not to sound awkward for this page's situation, but when have ANY of these pages not be so cute?! o3o EVERY page these characters are nothing but cuteness.

If given the options here, I think the first 2 panels are fine. So for Panel 3, I think it'll be:

Panel 3
"He's gonna fall!!"

Also holy crap ANGEL'S USING THE NINJA RUN!!! Owo

roninhunt0987

6 years, 11 months ago

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@ LeydenTheWolf

O.o ninja run??

LeydenTheWolf

6 years, 11 months ago

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@ roninhunt0987

That running style Angel's using resembles the Ninja Run from naruto.

roninhunt0987

6 years, 11 months ago

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@ LeydenTheWolf

he must of been watching naruto then

LeydenTheWolf

6 years, 11 months ago

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@ roninhunt0987

Let's not be too hasty, cuz we don't know if he saw Naruto or not. i'm just saying it's a reference. ^^;

roninhunt0987

6 years, 11 months ago

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@ LeydenTheWolf

X3 ohh

wardskoll

6 years, 11 months ago

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y bueno... a eso se le llama selección natural XD

kingkingkolton

6 years, 11 months ago

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The only fixes I have are for minor grammatical bits, but what you have is perfectly fine as it is.
Panel 1
"Look, mommy!"

panel 2
"Justin!!"

panel 3
"He's gonna fall!"

The last one is more "natural," but as I said, what you have is fine as it is. Good job!

AlexTH116

6 years, 11 months ago

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from normal dude, to suddenly fucking super man.

CuriousKit

6 years, 11 months ago

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Speech is pretty good. I'd just have "He's gonna fall!" for the last one, as it's more natural to say it that way, as kingkingkolton said.

Zeikcied

6 years, 11 months ago

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"Look mommy" and "look daddy" are the most dangerous phrases in a child's vocabulary.

Cyandog182

6 years, 11 months ago

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TrmWoBneIww

Start this up at 0:35 and you will know how every guy feels when he does something like Angel is trying to do.

DragonKingZero

6 years, 11 months ago

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@ Cyandog182

Oddly, the first place mind went to was Zero's theme, but I couldn't decide which version fits best (though I'm currently leaning closest to the MMX2 version).

LeydenTheWolf

6 years, 11 months ago

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X3 Thanks for taking my third panel edit, broski. =3

SolaroArts

6 years, 11 months ago

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Hope Angel saves the child in time.