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This page has MommyHazel's Roomom carrying her little pupper around the city, while Vahn Green checks his tweets and BetoWolf takes a stroll.
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Shouldn't the sign have CHILDREN'S instead, rather than CHILDRENS'? Children is already plural. Similar to usage in WOMEN'S and MEN'S shoes, for example. </nitpick>
I'm liking the comic so far; I really enjoy your art style.
Shouldn't the sign have CHILDREN'S instead, rather than CHILDRENS'? Children is already plural. Si
I think I'm going to love this comic, but I was confused as to what the comic was going to be about up until this page, when it was revealed that they are age regressed. If I may give a few suggestions: the explanation between pages two and three needs to be expanded and given more explanation. Why isn't Nicole Roo's mother in page two, but the package arrives for both of them in page six? This is further confusing by the fact that page two shows Nicole taking care of both of them in a montage. Page three says she is a hired mother, but it's not explained that she is a hired mother for "regressees" until page six. If you don't want to draw any more pages that is fine, because you can fill page three with exposition.
I think I'm going to love this comic, but I was confused as to what the comic was going to be about
There's a lot more to go! We're still scratching the surface here, and there was also a teaser comic that introduces the premise in a basic way (https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=1070598). I also didn't want to frontload my story with too much explanation or exposition because I think it would make the story feel contrived. The characters wouldn't necessarily be talking outwardly about this sort of thing since it's commonplace for them, and I prefer to leave the audience guessing and feed them bits of information as we go along, letting them discover what's different about this world.
With that said, I appreciate you telling me that certain details are a bit too confusing. I will definitely be delving into these crucial parts with the story as it develops, and this first chapter is intended to explain a lot of that without necessarily having to read a wall of text ahead of time. Unfortunately I've been dragging my heels a little the past month or so, but rest assured that there's a lot left to be said about this comic as a whole.
Thanks a lot for the feedback!
There's a lot more to go! We're still scratching the surface here, and there was also a teaser comic
I am concerned about this comic even more now that I was before. In every comic I have read enough information was given by the second page that the reader understood the direction of the comic. The way you have presented this comic is that this chapter, chapter 1, is the introduction and the teaser is superfluous information that is not necessary, however, In my opinion what you presented in the teaser is necessary information, making this a nine page introduction with very little word count per page. You are worried about swamping your readers with too much information, but I think you should be concerned about not providing enough to keep the reader interested, especially considering you just said you don't plan on pumping these out in a rapid fashion.
If you have a look at [ur=http://www.furaffinity.net/view/22712615/]the latest page of Found[/url], another babyfur webcomic, you'll see that your word count is pretty low.
I am concerned about this comic even more now that I was before. In every comic I have read enough
