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First in pool
Frozen brain
Mini-comic based on two fanfictions:

THE DREAMS MACHINE from
Chonik
Chonik


AND

EXPERIMENTO by me.

Yeah, I'm a writer too.

Only in spanish.

..............


Traducción:

<<¿Qué pasaría si...? Mezclamos a Donatello de "Experimento" y a Raphael de "The dreams machine".

Raph: ¿Cuál es mi nombre?

¿Y viceversa?>>

Keywords
male/male 63,490, incest 22,325, teenage mutant ninja turtles 5,115, raphael 4,144, turtles 3,566, donatello 3,232, turtlecest 2,518, tcest 2,087, raph 1,834, fanfiction 1,535, donnie 1,267
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 3 years, 9 months ago
Rating: General

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MetaLatias5
3 years, 9 months ago
Nice :D
I wish I could understand spanish to read those two stories...
missgravedad18
3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, Chonik is a great writer :)
ikara
3 years, 9 months ago
I found a way around it. Either right click and then select "translate to english" or if that doesn't work, highlight sections of words paragraph by paragraph then copy and paste them onto google translate.  If your internet doesn't let you do that, you might have to click "save webpage" which allows you to save the page like a document you are on and access it without going on the internet, and THEN you can copy and paste the words onto google translate. It won't give you a perfect english translation because some words just don't translate into other languages, but it gives you the jist of things.
MetaLatias5
3 years, 9 months ago
thanks for the advice, I'll try that :)
ikara
3 years, 9 months ago
Now I'm going to have to go read "Experimento" in order to find out just what the heck could make Donnie as frisky as Raph LOL
missgravedad18
3 years, 9 months ago
OMG! You rock, Ikara! And smart like Donnie! Your method is amazing! Thanks for the endeavor!
And I want warn you... My fics are rated mature (obviously), you know; Lemon, Tcest, more lemon, orgies, more lemon, M-preg! (Yeah! "Experimento" is M-preg! *-*).

I wish you like it! -And i want your opinion ;)

RaphxDonnie rules!
ikara
3 years, 9 months ago
I have finally read it!  It is a very interesting approach to the mpreg concept. Donnie's method reminds me a lot of how the Roslin Institute cloned Dolly the sheep.  Usually m-preg fics bother me because of the scientific inaccuracies (even though it is supposed to be fiction it bothers me) the idea of a male's belly getting bigger then pushing a baby out his colon, it would kill him! People do not realize how the body works! The only thing the colon is also known as the large intestine is about five feet (or 1.5 meters) long and only 2.5 inches (6-7 cm) in diameter (to give perspective, a golf ball is 1.68 inches or 42.7mm in diameter) and it CAN NOT stretch wider than that! Also they don't seem to realise that the flesh inside the rectum and the colon is very fragile and thin, Vaginas are strong and can take lots of abuse. The anus can not stretch as far as a Vagina can to push out a baby, also, the male pelvic bone does not have an opening for such a thing to occur. But you did not do any of that and for that I am extremely grateful. Instead of taking the easy way out you to a more science fiction approach that has a better chance of being believable. I also like what you did with April.  I dislike fics that insist on making her pregnant with Casey because it is not cannon. Nobody seems to read the source material anymore or else they would know that April is infertile (due to the odd circumstances of her birth) which is why she and Casey adopted Shadow, because they were unable to conceive a child of their own. Especially for the 2012 turtles, with how much the Kraang altered her DNA, the thought of April being able to become pregnant naturally seems highly questionable to me. So I appreciate that you took that into consideration and used it as an opportunity to put 2012 Donatello's genius in studying chemicals, mutagen, and human/Kraang hybrid DNA to use.     There is also a lot of drama that has me steaming!  I am so angry at Donatello! And also a little bit at April.  She should have discussed things with Casey first since this is a huge decision that will affect both of their lives forever, she should have confirmed that he was willing and emotionally prepared to become a father. Men and women should have equal rights. If a woman was raped I believe she has the right to an abortion and should not be forced to become a mother. And if a man is raped, or if his girlfriend lies about birth control and tricks him into getting her pregnant when he thought he was being careful, he should not be held responsible or have to help raise the child or pay child support if he does not wish to. It would be different he wanted sex but didn't think things through and take precautions, then he would have to deal with the consequences of his actions, but if he thought he was being careful when really he was being manipulated, that is not fair to him.  If April loves Casey and wants to start a family with him, then she should have discussed this with him to make sure he wanted the same thing. If you love someone you take into account their happiness as well. The same goes for Donatello. He betrayed Raph's trust!  He should have been honest and asked for Raphael's consent in the matter.  The fact that you can get me so emotionally riled up over a fictional story says a lot about you as a writer! Especially since I don't speak Spanish and there are many things that are lost in translate in google because I think some spanish words to not have a counterpart in english, as well as slang or dialect. It's impressive that even with a language barrier the story still affects me. I wouldn't be this upset if the story wasn't appealing. The ability to affect reader's emotions, for good or bad is a talent! Well done!  I look forward to being angry at Donatello in future chapters while still worrying about him, LOL!
missgravedad18
3 years, 8 months ago
OMG! Ikara! Really thanks for reading.
Exactly! I'm trying to make a fanfic... hummm, credible?
I refuse the idea with a baby inside Donnie's stomach. Every fic with mpreg employed this plot. I don't.
Thanks for everything, Babe!
I love your endeavor for read this! ...And I love you! <3
Spicyturtles
3 years, 9 months ago
Jajaja excelente, amo ambas historias XD jamás me habría imaginado emparejar ambos universos así
missgravedad18
3 years, 9 months ago
Wow! ¿De'veras?
¡Muchas gracias por leernos!
Fue algo que se me ocurrió una noche que necesitaba ocupar mi mente xD
¡Gracias de nuevo!
Chonik
3 years, 9 months ago
Jajajajaja genial!!!! XDD Me encanta verlo por aquí también!
Podrías subir ambas versiones (en ingles y español) como una Submission de dos páginas, sabes como? :3
missgravedad18
3 years, 9 months ago
Yey! ¡Por fin pude!
Lo había intentado hacer antes, pero como era rápidin pues dije; "Meh, después".
¡Pero ya supe como! ¡Haha! Se nota que soy nueva aquí xD
daysha109
3 years, 8 months ago
Jajajaja creo que me gustaría leer la narración de un evento así, sería muy divertido. Seguramente Rafa de "Experimento" y Donnie de "The Dreams Machine" igual celarían a sus respectivos si algo así llegara a pasar :P... Por cierto soy Misato
missgravedad18
3 years, 8 months ago
¡Dioses! ¡Creo que sería algo chusco y muy divertido de leer! Amo "The Dreams Machine", y creo que incluso a Chonik le parecería divertido.
¡Haha! Me has dado unas cuantas lindas imagenes para soñar esta noche, ¡gracias, linda! <3
BearusuMyo
3 years, 5 months ago
Jajajaja Son todas muy bien hechas, lo amé.
LeoTMNTFangirl
2 years, 7 months ago
Do you have an Archives of our Own account? I really want to read Experimento beacause I can read Spanish fairly well (I just can't write in it) and Inkbunny doesn't always work the best on my tablet.
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