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by Aogami
LEMAHNAYD
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First five pages of a story I'm writing. Personal project. :)

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male 640,109, female 520,079, human 46,921, comic 36,143, elf 1,705, dreamy 80
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Type: Picture/Pinup
Published: 4 years, 4 months ago
Rating: General

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mobkiller
4 years, 4 months ago
Ohhh, that starts promising :3
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! I have the whole first chapter scripted so I hope to get some time to work on it soon ~ I'm actually pretty excited about it n.n
mobkiller
4 years, 4 months ago
Nice. I´m already looking forward to see where this start leads us. ^__^
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
YOU SHALL SEE HOHOHO
chaosblackwing
4 years, 4 months ago
Interesting first page, lots of great details on the characters and the background, and a nice little 'what is going on here?' hook.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! It took a really long time to do lol, I'm glad all the little details didn't go unnoticed :)
Tanna
4 years, 4 months ago
I really like this! Can't wait to see more!
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks n.n I want to do more too! I'm excited to tell this story. haha it's so frustrating because it takes so long to do just one page and I want to tell it all at once x3
NeksusCat
4 years, 4 months ago
Looks interesting! :3
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
thanks! I can't wait to do more :)
smuttyspouic
4 years, 4 months ago
All of my yessesees
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
there will be more! ... Eventually! :D
TwoTails
4 years, 4 months ago
What's Zelda up to..
XD

(just reminds me of a Hyrule market for some reason)
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Actually I based the city design loosely on Agrabah haha. It probably reminds you of Zelda cuz of the elves running around since all Hylians have pointy elf ears :)
Ruffy
4 years, 4 months ago
Ohhhh =o thats beautiful
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks!
Sheep
4 years, 4 months ago
I can't wait for the second page! >W< I wonder what will happen! Seriously!
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
you'll just have to wait until I have another 6 hours to spend drawing it lol
DragonFU
4 years, 4 months ago
Comic by Aogami, GASP!
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Indeed! D:
Arcshep
4 years, 4 months ago
If you ever need a talking dog mount... *wink wink*
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
lol *patpat*
pintocat
4 years, 4 months ago
In Soviet Russia, ArcShep mount YOU
MisterBlacksTwin
4 years, 4 months ago
You know dying is a lifetime of peaceful sleep lel.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
No, dying is dying. Sleep is sleep. Just because poets like to equate the two doesn't make it so :P
MisterBlacksTwin
4 years, 4 months ago
Someone had to question it.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Well just to clarify, no - he is not selling death.
MisterBlacksTwin
4 years, 4 months ago
I hope hes sellin waffles OwO
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
even better, furries
cantebury
4 years, 4 months ago
Looks like you put a lotta effort into the small details here ^_^
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Yeah I did. It took a ridiculously long time lol
cantebury
4 years, 4 months ago
The time and effort shows ^_^  It looks promising to start 8D
FidelTheMouse
4 years, 4 months ago
Awesome Comic, Looks amazing. nyaan~=3
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
thanks :)
FidelTheMouse
4 years, 4 months ago
ahehe your welcome. nyaan~=3
uisce
4 years, 4 months ago
Very nice, I love the backgrounds.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! :D
Akairo
4 years, 4 months ago
WOW *-* I want to see more :*
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
n.n
lerwin
4 years, 4 months ago
I am probably missing something. What is he auctioning off?
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
The dreamies - the furries he's standing with. It'll become clearer as I do more pages :)
lerwin
4 years, 4 months ago
oooooooh ok. Well I will not have any opinion on the slavery of this world until I learn more about it because to be honest some slavery seems like it can be ok, but not the type that is forced. I mean I dunno. If there are rules and regulations to keep them treated human and that it was at least in part their own choice I think it isn't terrible. I don't think I could ever have even a willing slave to be honest, but still.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
I don't approve of real life slavery, but in a harmless fantasy I don't think that even abject cruelty or violence should be considered wrong. It doesn't harm anyone - at worst it's tasteless.

But I'll tell you how slavery works in this world. It exists in the same way it did during the middle ages. In some places it's outlawed and in other places when a city is sacked, its people are often taken as slaves. With Dreamies however it's a bit different. They aren't considered slaves, they're living works of art - bred for beauty, temperament, intelligence and their tails' ability to produce a powder that can put a person into a sleep filled with pleasant dreams - hence the name. Although they often act as servants, they live pretty cushy lives as only the wealthiest can afford them.
lerwin
4 years, 4 months ago
Interesting. I have a story I am writing where slavery is legal, but each of the three kingdoms in it have different rules about it. The one I like best slavery is mostly a way for those who have fallen so far they would die on the streets to at least have food and a roof over their head in exchange for being someone elses property. Basically a way to allow those who have fallen and don't feel they can ever get up (especially since it isn't a modern setting) to have a life even if it isn't completely theirs.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
haha. Like the Mereenese who begged the Khaleesi to let them return to being slaves. xD
lerwin
4 years, 4 months ago
um...... yes? I kind of have no clue who either of those things are.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Really? No Game of Thrones for you, books or tv show? sad days! If you're into middle ages type fantasy it's a must read
lerwin
4 years, 4 months ago
Oh I have only seen a few episodes. it is way confusing and I am bad with names to begin with. are one of the groups someone that the dragon lady went against in her crusade?
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Yes, Danaerys Targaryen, First of her name, Storm-born, Queen of the Andals, the Rhoynar and the First Men, Khaleesi of Great Grass Sea, the Unburnt, and Mother of Dragons took the city of Mereen in her conquest of Essos. x3

Great books tho. I know there's a lot of names but you'll get them over time
lerwin
4 years, 4 months ago
Well I hope your story is interesting. I love reading and writing although I get distracted easily. the longest I put down a book before picking it back up was about two years.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
rofl well the song of ice and fire books are super long like ... 1200+ pages apiece xD but I read all five in about a month
kst3xh
4 years, 4 months ago
Looking forward to reading it
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
I've got page 2 all sketched out and partly inked ~ hoping to finish it tomorrow n.n
KodyYoung
4 years, 4 months ago
Just $325? How about I just increase that by another 1538%

Interesting comic. Like the design.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
three hundred twenty-five thousand. And their currency isn't USD either :P
KodyYoung
4 years, 4 months ago
I know it's not USD, just put the money sign there. =P  But didn't know it was 325,000, just saw him saying 325.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
Well ... the bid before it was three hundred thousand so ...
KodyYoung
4 years, 4 months ago
Oh derp, over read that line, my bad. *epic fail*
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
hopefully page 2 will help clear that up too now that it's up
KodyYoung
4 years, 4 months ago
Nice new page
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
thanks. Just put up page 3 :)
KodyYoung
4 years, 4 months ago
That was fast. Nice.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
x3 it'll be a little bit before I have time to do another page sadly
KodyYoung
4 years, 3 months ago
Nice new pages :)
Aogami
4 years, 3 months ago
thanks ~ more coming soon :)
Soroxel
4 years, 4 months ago
Very pretty. xD Though I need to ask, do you have Nonoel's "go ahead" to include dreamies in your comic, even if it's for non-profit? While I love the artist's designs and concepts, I've noticed they're a bit, er, "special" with dreamies, 'closed species' and all that.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
She seems relatively chill about it. The two main dreamy characters both belong to
Sheep
Sheep
and I, although only one of them has made a very brief appearance so far. I did make up a couple of them as ancillary characters for the first and second pages, but if she cares she hasn't said anything, and she replied to a casting call journal I had Sheep make on FA where I asked for volunteers to loan me their dreamy character designs to be used for that purpose going forward offering one of her own designs. So going forward they'll all be bought and paid for designs anyways, no need for anybody to get butthurt about it, and honestly popular though she may be nonoel is generally pretty drama-free. :) If she does make a stink about it I'll just go back and change the ancillary characters in the pages I already have done into designs from the volunteer pool, no harm no foul.
Soroxel
4 years, 4 months ago
That's good to know! I've been visiting the "artist beware" livejournal lately, and there was a similar case of someone with a closed species not wanting them used on anything else, but someone commissioned one and went around using it like it was their own, and drama drama drama... It's made me weary. xD And I've seen some of nonoel's more 'upset' journals when people go taking dreamies for granted or asking if they can draw one for themselves, so I guess I have this short-fused image of them in my head when it comes to this particular species. Moreso because I have ONLY those sort of things to go by, since I don't actually know the artist myself. xD

But yeah, it's a relief. =P I like the two pages of this comic so far, so I wouldn't want to see it stopped and erased for fictional-species drama. xD

edit: Whoops, meant to reply to your reply. o no My bad.
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
haha it's ok about the reply thing. And yeah I mean ... the adopt species is super popular and there are a lot of people out there who've paid a lot of money to get one within the rules nonoel has set up, so when people DON'T follow her rules they get all white knight and hunt people down on her behalf. I've spoken to her a few times though and while I don't think she considers us like ... friends or anything I honestly don't see he breaking her foot off in my ass for a couple panels in a manga that have unnamed unrecurring characters that happen to be the species she made.

Besides, the rest of them will all be official on the up and up designs she's made herself or that other people designed and paid for the privilege of being in her species (she just recently did a design your own event for a fee and a lot of people took her up on it), and I have no problem going back and changing the ones I put in there as space fillers if it comes to that. I don't feel like she's the person to go and launch an attack without talking to me first
sexiestofoffenders
4 years, 4 months ago
this looks cool, I saw Sheeps journal about this and offered up my babies
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
awesome ~ :)
Malachyte
4 years, 4 months ago
The clothing in this is fantastic. I want to wear all of it :Y
Aogami
4 years, 4 months ago
haha yay ~ I always worry that my clothing designs aren't creative enough
sexiestofoffenders
4 years, 4 months ago
can't wait to read more *u*
kiwwy
4 years, 3 months ago
great style
Aogami
4 years, 3 months ago
thanks ~
Roketsune
4 years, 3 months ago
Looks pretty pawesome!
Aogami
4 years, 3 months ago
n.n
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