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Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 24
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Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 25

Jamal, wait!
Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 24
Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 26
Jamal visits Sam for his usual Friday session with a lot on his mind

Chapter 25: L O V E H E A L S

Listen to your heart
Once you do, you’ll start to see
Visions of a family standing tall
Erasing years of being forced apart
Hope grows inside of me
Embracing joy amidst it all
And with this brand new start
Love has finally set me free
Someone answered my desperate call


Voice of Jamal is pocketducks
Voice of Shane is malcolmthebear


I enjoyed this chapter for a variety of reasons. Sam, Jamal and Shane all talking together emphasizes the fact that Jamal no longer feels thje need to hide things, and has started caring about Shane as well, evident by when Shane's stomach growls and he sends him off. I was also really happy with the flow of the chapter this time. This one was really easy to write. The only problem I have with the chapter is the line "Jamal's progress over the last couple months has been absolutely amazing." That was supposed to be 'last couple weeks' but I derped and wrote it wrong, not realizing my mistake until long after it was posted.

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Type: Music - Single Track
Published: 5 years, 11 months ago
Rating: General

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