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Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 24

Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 25
Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 23
Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 25
The lawyer explains what's going to happen....

Chapter 24: J U D G E M E N T

Journeys that have seemed so long
Under stress, we all now are
Difficult decisions are forced to be made
Grief now sings a haunting song
Emitting notes heard from afar
My heart is wishing it had stayed
Everyone does things that are wrong
Now skies are dark with not one star
The heart now feels it’s been betrayed


Voice of Kara is tekoerin
Voice of Lawyer is


This is another chapter that was written mostly by
, but, in this case, it's because I didn't know how to go about doing it. I think it was done quite well, and the part I like most is Kara questioning if the whole thing can be called off if they don't sign the papers. If it hadn't been obvious that she dislikes the idea up to now, that part, to me, made it clear.

I wrote the poem for this one, and when I did, I actually stunned Dipper over the line "Grief now sings a haunting song." That is one of few times that a poem I made has surprised him.

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Type: Music - Single Track
Published: 5 years, 11 months ago
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