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Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 2

Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 3
porcupine_passions_2_-_chapter_02.mp3
Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 1
Porcupine Passions 2 - Chapter 3
I hate telling my son this, but he has to know...

Chapter 02: T H O R N B O D Y

To know that a son
Has a heart so kind,
Only a mother can see.
Rest now, little one.
Nice dreams, may you find.
Believe in yourself, and in me.
Our dreams let us run
Deep within our mind
Your own little place where you're free.

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Voice of Kara Thornbody is tekoerin
Voice of Trevor Heathcliff is koichi18
Voice of Greydon Heathcliff is
Thwaitesy
Thwaitesy


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This chapter introduced the characters Greydon and Trevor. It also revealed that Greydon pronounces Kara's name as 'Care-uh' rather than 'Car-uh'. Initially I was going to have Thwaitesy re-record the lines to say the name properly, but decided against it. I decided instead, to use that as the way most people from Georgia, outside of Kara's family, pronounced the name, and kept things that way whenever possible. The only exception to this would be Kara's doctor, whom, although it's never mentioned, is not originally from Georgia, and thus, learned Kara's name properly, having never heard the name at all prior to meeting her.

Doing this chapter helped cement the idea of the divorce being the reason that Bobby's parents were splitting up. Admittedly, though, at this point in time, I still hadn't yet determined how or why the divorce was happening, hence why Kara refers to the decision as being 'the best thing to do'. Yes, it was vague, but I didn't want the fact I hadn't come up with the idea as to why, to be the reason I stopped writing the story so soon, so I went with it.

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Published: 6 years, 9 months ago
Rating: General

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furloverguy84
6 years, 9 months ago
Another well written chapter. Geez this is so much for a kid to take in all at once. :(
yaegashi
6 years, 9 months ago
So was the "next you'll say one of you is dying" line a reference to plan A?
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