The first page is an older version of the art from earlier today. I added in a fourth improved version later and that is the version I am crossposting from https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39571160/ and stuff. I set the background color as green when I saved it on the GIMP yet the preview I post to Discord of the FA link shows white. I wonder how it will look here.
You gave it less neck, taking away what makes it look like a dove( - then seagull - now goose). If you look at a picture of one, then notice that the neck goes down from the eye and doesn't get thinner, so the oldest image is the closest one .. also, their beaks doesn't curl down much, so it wouldn't be much visible in pixelart.
You gave it less neck, taking away what makes it look like a dove( - then seagull - now goose). If y
Any more suggestions? I think I fixed it with https://inkbunny.net/s/2322981 but at this rate maybe I should do the next round of fixes on a Twitch livestream.
Any more suggestions? I think I fixed it with https://inkbunny.net/s/2322981 but at this rate maybe