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[SFW Adventure] The Fight Against Equestria: Prologue

[SFW Adventure] The Fight Against Equestria: Chapter 1
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Keywords male 696188, female 575580, pony 73383, my little pony 44633, horse 40744, mouse 29918, young 26263, my little pony friendship is magic 17968, transformation 17874, rodent 17067, rat 11958, sfw 9643, hypnosis 7366, my little pony: friendship is magic 4269, mind control 3836, adventure 3281, brainwashing 1094, captured 797, army 514, safe for work 430, prologue 152, worshiping 82, ambush 79, worshipping 70, chased 25
Prologue


"There is no escape from your destiny, little ones!'' a pony said.

Three kids, two mouse boys, a 12-year-old and a 14-year-old, and one 13-year-old rat girl, in a wide open pasture were running away from mob of ponies that were catching up to them!

"We won't let you turn us into ponies, you freaks of nature!'' the little boy yelled.

They kept running until mob cornered them! They blocked the kids, so they couldn?t get out. They began laughing evilly as they crowded around them.

"Heh heh, you never had a chance of getting away, children... Now you will join us forever as a pony...''

"Never!'' the girl said, hiding behind the older boy.

The little boy did the same while the older boy gave a serious look. A blue pony wearing a purple wizard hat and a star cape walked forward out of the crowd, standing in front of the older boy.

"Now that you three are cornered, I think you'll play ball. But... I'll give you a chance to prove your loyalty to us...to avoid the harshest of re-education. We've heard about this special group that's good at solving problems on your planet. We are interested in them. Tell us. Now,'' the blue pony said.

"Never! We won't give you any information, and we'll never serve you! Now send us back!'' the older boy said as he stood in front of the other two kids, acting as their bodyguard.

"Oooh, so you must be the big-brains of this group. What a courageous little mouse... So, tell me, why won't you sell them out...?'' the pony said as she came closer to the young boy.

Her eyes glowed a bluish aura, making the boy's eyes begin to do the same.

"L...Look away, guys...'' the boy said to the other two, who, unfortunately, were already hypnotized, smiling calmly at the blue pony.

"Her eyes are so...'' the girl murmured, letting her arms dangle.

"Peaceful...'' the younger boy said, doing the same.

"Looks like they didn't hear you...heh. Fall, boy...'' she commanded.

The boy's legs felt weak, making him fall to his knees. He smiled nervously as his eyes fully radiated the bluish aura she was exuding. He was trying to use every fiber in his body to resist her spell.

"I still won?t...tell you...anything.''

"Relax, little one... Tell me...everything...''

"N-No...'' the boy said as the two behind him were pulled back into the crowd of ponies.

She zapped his forehead with a blue spark, making him yell.

"Aaah! ...ugh...'' he said as his eyes shined even brighter.

She giggled, putting a hoof on his forehead, where she shot the blast.

"There. Maybe a little mental reprogramming will make you talk. Now...speak.''

He felt obligated to tell her any secret he ever had. The words almost slipped off his lips.

"They?re...the three heroes on our planet. They are the strongest forces we have...''

"Oh? Is that so... Tell me about them.''

"One is a wolf...who has a dark side... The other is a dragon that has anger issues... The other is a...mouse...that I know commonly watches this show...''

The pony grinned, putting its hoof under his chin, lifting his head a little.

"The one who watches us... What is his name?" she said, as he sighed in bliss.

"Jason...''

"Perfect... That?s exactly what I needed... Good boy... Now, how much do you want to join us...?" she asked.

"P-Please... I want to be a pony...''

She giggled as she shook her head.

"But what about all that resistance... I can't have that... Hehe... Beg.''

The boy began bowing, kissing one of her front hooves.

"O-Oh please make me a pony! Please! I need to serve you, my queen! Please!'' he begged, making her laugh.

"Oh, how excellent. Very well. I will make you a pony. Or rather...they will. Take my loyal minion away...'' she commanded, as some ponies grabbed him as well, pulling him into the crowd.

"Thank you, my queen! Thank you! I will-mmrph!'' he said as his mouth was covered, drowned out by the giggling of the ponies around him.

Her eyes returned to normal as she giggled evilly.

"Take them to the facility! Change them right away. I need more loyal servants of that other world...'' she commanded as some ponies out of the mob guided the kids toward the forest.

"Now the rest of you, go tell `you know who' to find the TV this mouse watches. We've limited the planet, so now it is just time to root them out... If we capture this one, we can eventually capture all three of them... Then, we can use them to make the universe bow to us! Come, there is no time to waste!" she said, laughing evilly as a black tint flashed in her eyes for a second.

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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First in pool
[SFW Adventure] The Fight Against Equestria: Chapter 1
So...I'll admit. When I was younger, I hated MLP. I thought it was girly and cutesy, and I hated that stuff because Codename Kids Next Door taught me to hate that kind of stuff(in the episode where it is basically boys vs girls). Now, I don't really...HATE it...but I like more of the art, rather than the show. This is a story that I wrote on paper in my freshman year of high school. I did like the adventure theme, so I polished it up, and now, my first SFW adventure begins here! The prologue is kind of short and doesn't really introduce much...but the next chapter will introduce some of Lire's best friends! If you're curious about Lire's powers, I'd recommend reading the character bio I posted a while back. The other two will have bios in the future...but I just need to commission them. Hope you enjoy!

Keywords
male 696,188, female 575,580, pony 73,383, my little pony 44,633, horse 40,744, mouse 29,918, young 26,263, my little pony friendship is magic 17,968, transformation 17,874, rodent 17,067, rat 11,958, sfw 9,643, hypnosis 7,366, my little pony: friendship is magic 4,269, mind control 3,836, adventure 3,281, brainwashing 1,094, captured 797, army 514, safe for work 430, prologue 152, worshiping 82, ambush 79, worshipping 70, chased 25
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