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Gotta Be Somebody

The Art Of Breaking
by Bartan
...Yes, I'm serious. "Vore". You read the thumbnail/tags correctly.

If you possibly remember the last time I released a piece on the 1st of April; I don't like "National Be A Dick Day." I don't enjoy being a dick to people, I don't enjoy being a dick to. But I did want to do something... 'Out of Character', for a little bit of a laugh. Yet, also to perhaps change this flum forsaken "Holiday" from being all about pranks or making people irritated, to perhaps just doing something so unexpected from yourself.

Now, don't get this wrong: this piece IS a full on Vore-Based story. Brand new characters, so you don't need to know anything before starting. You don't even to have needed to read any of my other works to enjoy this. I've had a lot of people over the years wanting me to try one for quite some time, and... Even though I did kiiiinda do parts of it here and there, they were buried in walls of text and were barely a paragraph or two long. Not quite doing such a thing justice.

This piece should change that. And no, it's not just 'one small scene with a little bit of vore in it', there's more to it than just this one tiny clip of it. However, I had to do it in my own... Little way, so to speak. So you'll have to deal with characters and development and jazz. Granted, you will be rewarded... I hope.

Now, this is a completely raw attempt at such a thing. I did gather some intel on the subject of Vore over the years, but this piece had no assistance or any help/opinions/etc of others involved. This is purely my own attempt and I... Honestly cannot tell you if it's any good. I'm not into vore, I don't know what the overall appeal is. But I tried, so... Yeah. Try to enjoy this if you do like it, tell me how I did.

Keep in mind that this is also a 'Clean' story as well (no sex, no hard vore), and do note that I am Not going to be doing this regularly. If ever again. I don't completely hate vore, but I don't like it and didn't really enjoy writing this as you possibly might think. So I want NO Requests to do more of this jazz or even offers to do Commissions. This is all you get from me, enjoy it.

Gotta Be Somebody © Nickleback

Note #1: This is serious. Really. A full on story. No pranks. No Fake Outs. No silliness. No meta humor of any kind. I gave this piece an honest shot.

Note #2: I mean it: It's a real piece. I'm not testing you or your trust. If it isn't a story, by all means: call me out in the comments to warn the others. It's easy to let your guard down here, but if you're interested... It's only a click and a read away.

male 687,792, female 566,761, dragon 87,180, feral 39,809, oral 37,535, wet 16,117, vore 15,899, tongue 15,738, clean 8,234, saliva 5,124, size 4,392, teeth 4,332, difference 3,625, play 3,167, fangs 2,708, playing 2,659, kobold 2,603, mouth 2,320, soft vore 2,128, maw 1,787, swallowing 1,283, jungle 1,255, throat 1,060, wyvern 992, cleaning 571, no sex 501, no yiff 364, uvula 142
Type: Writing - Document
Published: 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Rating: General

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2 months, 2 weeks ago

For context, I do enjoy vore, and I found your story very enjoyable indeed!

Not everyone who likes vore stories enjoys plot and character development, admittedly, but I very much do. I sometimes word it that I enjoy a "story with vore in it" more than a "vore story."

It might help that I've been on an inexplicable kobold & dragon kick recently, but I found Sre and Rava's relationship very compelling. Sre was a very interesting character, it was nice seeing him proud of his intelligence but still bound to his kobold instincts to be fascinated by dragons, and watching Rava's attitude towards him change over the course of the story was sweet. As for the vore, Rava's constant teasing was fun, and I really liked how ambiguously it ended.

I recognize that you'll probably never write another vore story, and that's understandable. It's not a theme everyone 'gets,' much less enjoys, but especially for your first attempt I found it admirable! I certainly found it to be a nicely-written, sweet little scene, and as far as vore goes, it happened to play to my tastes.

Using April Fool's Day as an excuse to make content the creator doesn't usually make/enjoy is probably the best use of the holiday I've ever seen, and it was great to stumble on this. Thank you for writing and sharing this for people who's tastes don't match your own, even if you never write one again.
2 months, 2 weeks ago
^^^^ Best comment I've ever gotten on Inkbunny, and probably ever will <3

Thanks for writing that, Arta. I'm actually quite surprised next to no one seemed to look at this piece, but perhaps they did think it was an April Fools joke ^^; That was to be expected. Still, I'm so glad you did enjoy this and that it matched your tastes perfectly. I worked hard to make 'different' characters from the rest of my stories, and I was worried that Rava's change was a bit too quick. Especially considering the entire story spans like a hour and a half "in-world time". Buuuut it's not uncommon for my characters to move rather quickly x3

Still, thank you for the kind works mate. They really do mean a lot, considering I don't get them very often <3 Maybe next year I'll throw another attempt at it, but there's no telling what will come up. You can always enjoy this one at least~

-Bartan <3
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