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(Switch Act/ INFr1 / Meziadi) All-Out Attack

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(Meziadi P) - The Script
getting awful close to canning this thing

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Type: Comic
Published: 1 week, 2 days ago
Rating: General

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IGSA101
1 week, 2 days ago
It's not the best comic you've done, but it's way different from your usual works. I think it's alright, your art is still great, you need to work on dialogue a bit just to be a little more natural sounding (acting it out to yourself will help some). As for the pacing, a page at the start just setting the story, or at least the world, up would help a lot for the tone and flow of the comic.
Carpetwurm
1 week, 2 days ago
i dunno if you can really compare it to my other comics since they're all porn (unless you're talking about switch act or infr1, but i really doubt it considering that no one read those)
IGSA101
1 week, 1 day ago
I read em, and I think that there is merit to having at least an attempt at a story with porn. Even with your porn comics being pw/op that makes them different from this.
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