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Neurika .5 ANIMATION

Lord of Murder
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Ultra Lusamine animation
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Neurika refs 1
Maria's Training

long last, it is done. Cut from a full animation into comic format, it is quicker [and I hate animating lips :p] so all the good stuff can move.

I don't want animation critique but for anything else, would love advice. it's going to be a struggle, but i have the plot written out for most part, hopefully will be able to invite more people to work with me on this so that i can focus more on animation than having to colour it [colouring animation takes up almost as much time as animating itself p::: ]

oh god have mercy on me ;__;

haha more in future, for updates, you can view http://chokeyhazard.tumblr.com/

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Published: 1 year, 6 months ago
Rating: General

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1 year, 6 months ago
This animation is just lovely!

I sure hope there will be an continuation of the story, it got me hooked.
1 year, 6 months ago
1 year, 6 months ago
you can have mouthes hiden by masks and for mechanical based creatures no need to realy animate the mouth so you can cut corners there
1 year, 6 months ago
Have a question
1 year, 6 months ago
It's high quality. I enjoyed it alot. There are bits that would be too much for me to read, but they work in a comic. The opening narrative literally almost scared me away because I thought it would all be so wordy, but it wasn't so that's good.

I had fun! The animation isn't bad, it's good! I want to critique it, but I won't because you asked.

I had fun all the way through! I hope that this becomes significantly larger and very fast.
1 year, 6 months ago
For the most part I really enjoyed it.  Over all solid character design, great use of expressions and poses.  The only part that I could not get in to was the story.  I absolutely love science fiction so I might be a bit biased when it comes to reading/watching things in that context.  There was no hook for the story, I didn't feel drawn into it in the first few minutes.  I kept watching because I am a fan of yours and I knew there would be some fantastic art and animation.  However the story fell flat.  It felt propped up by your artistic talents rather than being a vessel in which your art could convey the essence of your story.  I don't want to go into a shot by shot break down but if I were reading this as a screenplay or short story I would have read the first few pages and then flipped all the way to the end. I don't want to come off as Ms. Negativity.  I really enjoyed what you did here.  But I think it could be so much better. You are a very talented individual and I want your work to reflect that. Hope that makes sense.
1 year, 5 months ago
TBH, from a logical perspective, the Agent Beauty arc doesn't have much substance to it compared to the other story i'm cycling it in with. the remaining 4 pieces of them seem more like a slice of life than something that's got plot to it, but i'm not sure if I should change that, as I think they're meant to explain certain things in the main story [whether straight forward or otherwise] rather than tell a full story. maybe that's one of the problems with this

i've very little experience writing series works, so i'm of struggling with this in that respect. I'm hoping that it'll improve as i keep working on it [and reading other people's stuff and what not], but would love the help of someone who actually knows how to write longer series or something, to look over it and see maybe what could be changed. but seeing as it's ~13 episodes long, and a bit incomplete in some chapters, I don't think many people would be willing to sit through all of it and review with me

perhaps it's something i'd skip to the end too. Maybe I should have that question [would i skip this?] when i'm going over the stories again or something

thanks for the honest comments, i really appreciate it.
1 year, 5 months ago
Y'know, it hasn't even been 24 hours and your comment made me reconsider and change a lot of things for the next chapter already. I always thought writing was harder than art but jesus, the amount of time it takes to think of what may actually be interesting AND necessary versus what may not be necessary at all.

I studied quite a few hours on writing, still much more to study, but without this comment, I probably wouldn't have gone back and reanalysed the story. I thank you so much ;__; I wish more people had the courage to post stuff like your comment, because sometimes it can really open one's eyes ...

It's gonna take a long time to do this 'right', but ye motivated me to do it better. that's the best kind of critique.
1 year, 5 months ago
OMG thank you !.!  that means so much to me.  I am so glad I could be a little help.  I am here if you need an extra set of eyes on something.
1 year, 5 months ago
So shes calling an android designated R-E-X-11, Steve ... I like it. =3
1 year, 5 months ago
Excellent work, good fun, and I'm hooked on this intriguing universe!
1 year, 5 months ago
Cool Promos but your Full episode is being blocked for some reason on both link sites.
1 year, 5 months ago
it appears fine for me on multiple different countries, it's not country restricted. however, it is restricted on some viewing devices, so that may be the issue...
1 year, 5 months ago
Ok what player do you use to view it that is not restrictive?
1 year, 5 months ago
it's not a player, it's VIEWING DEVICE, like it may not be viewable on mobile or tablet sor something, idk what exactly it is, it does not list on the youtube
1 year, 5 months ago
I use flash player or the built in player from Firefox.
1 year, 4 months ago
working now hanks Trunch
10 months, 1 week ago
Wow that was awesome!
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