I would bet this is inspired by "Berserk." Only critique I can really see is the larger sword. I can't really tell how wide the blade is supposed to be. Maybe some shading or something?
I would bet this is inspired by "Berserk." Only critique I can really see is the larger sword. I c
So the posing is absolutely great, but the main thing I can see is that the characters don't seem to have much weight to them. At least not in regards to their environment, like, if he's standing in snow you'd see his paws sink in a bit. The figure on the left's positioning is a bit weird? Uhh, I think it could probably be fixed by adding more detail to his clothes so it's more clear that he's twisting, and his left back paw is a little awkwardly placed. Here's a red line to kinda show you what I mean: https://i.imgur.com/bIYeb1a.jpg
But overall the composition is great, good posing, good colors. Nice work!
So the posing is absolutely great, but the main thing I can see is that the characters don't seem to
>w< yay a critique thing thanks for those tips and yes now they do look like they were just pasted onto the scene also hmmm the positioning is weird but I think I know why now after you've pointed it out he's not actually supposed to be twisting as the pose I gave him was him recovering from a downward strike but due to teh way the sword is bent and his lower body is positioned it looks like he was supposed to be doing a swiping motion
>w< yay a critique thing thanks for those tips and yes now they do look like they were just pasted o
