Ehh, it's not bad, but I think you're trying too hard.
Tone it down about 12% and make sure you take the time to put in all the little details, while also crafting the picture so it's not too "busy". I think you can do it! Remember: It's all in the eyes.
Ehh, it's not bad, but I think you're trying too hard. Tone it down about 12% and make sure you tak