A weakness exposed

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Trueheart is kidnapped by Redemptionheart bear and looks like she's going to be stuck here for awhile. Will she ever escape? Find out next time,

Redemptionheart belongs to me, story written by anynomous.
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Chapter 1: A Weakness Exposed.
The sky was blue, the breeze was warm, and joy was all around the community. Bears of all colors, happy smiles, and waving hellos were everywhere. This is what life usually is like in the joyous community Care Bears lived. Sure dark forces would pop up time to time, but as long as they stuck together, no amount of danger could defeat them or their peaceful lives. Each bear had his or her own personality, talent, and interests. Sometimes though, they could get too personal or happy for their own good.

A certain bear loved the innocence and sensations others had. Her name was Redemptionheart, a cuter than average bear…and that’s saying something when it comes to care bears…that had an orange stomach, a rainbow mark, and a lovely purple fur color for her other areas of her fur. A fluffy tail, a big grin, and of course her sharp, observant purple eyes, all of these traits made her a popular bear in the community. She loved innocence and sensations others had so much that she would purposely go out of her way just to see how others would react. She also could get jealous if she knew or heard that some other bear was cuter than she was. The combination of these things led her to do something that if she was caught, could get her expelled from the community. She planned to do what very few Care Bears had ever done before: stealing an actual care bear. Kidnapping in other words.

The bear in her sights was none other than the goody-goody Trueheart. Trueheart, as her name suggested, was a lovely, innocent bear that most other bears adored. She was sweet, helpful, kind, and she always had really adorable expressions, both in her face and in her body language, that made some of the male care bears get wobbly in the knees. Trueheart usually always got what she wanted without seemingly trying hard. Redemptionheart couldn’t forgive Trueheart for stealing more attention than she herself had with the community.

The plan the purple bear had was simple yet brilliant. In the middle of the following night, while everyone was asleep, Redemptionheart ran to the kind care bear’s house and knocked quickly over and over again. “Trueheart! Trueheart wake up! I need your help. Something terrible has happened!”

Without the door opening Redemptionheart could show all the true emotions she wanted, and before the sleepy goody-goody Trueheart opened the door her eyes were very sharp with glee and her grin showed a fierceness that was rarely seen in the care bear world, let alone the community. She had a plan to get even with Trueheart and she wouldn’t let her steal any more of the attention Redemptionheart deserved!

Trueheart opened the door and yawned in a slow, almost painfully cute way. Even a sleepy tear formed on one of her eyes and Redemptionheart had to restrain herself to show just how jealous she felt at that moment. This cutie definitely deserved what was coming to her.

“R..Redemptionheart…it’s so late! I’ll do what I can to help but I don’t know how much help I can be.” Her multicolored pink and purple fluff of hair seemed to wiggle in the breeze as Redemptionheart’s purple paw grabbed the yellowish fur paw of Trueheart.

“We have no time! This is an emergency! It’s over at my second place.” Redemptionheart didn’t lie at all. This was an emergency and there was no time. Trueheart’s eyes widened and she finally snapped out of her sleepy state in order to get ready to help in any way she could. She didn’t know where she was going. Redemptionheart led her to a place that she had not been to before. Oddly something about this place felt…darker. A dark force near the community! This was an emergency! No harm could come upon the rest of the community if she could help it! With a cute determination expression she eagerly continued to follow Redemptionheart.

“Here we are.” The purple bear’s voice called out before she turned to the kind yellow bear and put both of her fluffy paws on the shoulders. “I hope you’re ready…Trueheart.” Something fell on top of the kind, sweet bear’s head and she felt her eyes lose focus.

“Re…Redemptionh…hea…heart…save yourself.” She fainted, not realizing that it was really the purple bear herself that grabbed her and made her stop in just the right position for her first little…invention to do its job. A shiny, metallic hand gave her a thumbs up as it seemed to know it successfully did its job.

“Great work my trusty hand. Let’s get this girl up and at ‘em.” The arm connected to that hand came in very handy (no pun intended) as the slightly evil chuckles of Redemptionheart escaped her composed nature. She used the arm and hand to make it much easier to drag the unconscious adorable bear into her second place: a cave with deep inner walls that stretched so far down that no one could see nor hear what happened in the cave. It was the perfect place…for a chamber unlike almost any care bear had ever known.

By the time Trueheart woke up she knew something was not right. Her bed felt much heavier than usual and it wasn’t soft at all. Then her small, heart shaped pink nose felt something drip onto it and her nose did a full 360 degree rotating scrunch to shake off the cold water. “Do I have a leak in my roof?” Her honest question was so sweet sounding and so innocent that it made Redemptionheart at the corner of the chamber growl. She’d love this more than she originally thought.

“Oh my!” Trueheart gasped as she realized it was far too dark, far too chilly, and also far too creepy to be her home. Something didn’t feel right at all! She tried to get out of her “bed” but nothing happened. Her legs wouldn’t bend and her arms felt like they were…restrained…oh my gosh! “WHAT HAPPENED TO ME????????” She screamed as loud as she could, and her body shook with the intensity of that scream.

“Ha.” A single, short, and almost a snarky/cocky laugh made Trueheart’s scream stop. However, it just made her even more scared. She started to shiver silently and her sweet voice in disbelief whispered,

“Re-e-e-demptionheart?”

“About time you woke up, sleeping beauty.” Suddenly Trueheart felt something cold and metallic touch her head and within just a few seconds her eyes were covered over with a cloth. “You were a big help with my emergency. Here’s your reward for helping me with my problem.”

Trueheart didn’t need to see the purple bear in order to know that an evil wide grin was on her face as the words were spoken. Without warning thanks to the blindfold a mix of sharp and fluffy sensations were pressing against the armpit and under arm fur. Trueheart’s mouth firmly closed but her chest puffed out as well as both cheeks as an intense ticklish feeling exploded.

“HHHMMMPH! HH…HHHMM…” Her cute small nose had flared creases along the smooth heart shaped edges as she frantically huffed and puffed through her nose to keep herself from opening her mouth. How…how did Redemptionheart know? Her underarms were very, VERY ticklish!

The purple bear herself was pleasantly surprised. She didn’t expect such a strong initial reaction. Still…it was incredibly satisfying but at the same time super infuriating that the cuteness of Trueheart’s resistance to holding back her huge laughing fit was causing the tickling bear. Her second paw slowly wafted through the air onto the second underarm spot, but a single paw finger was all what Redemptionheart used. It swished and seemed to slither along the furry under arm, trying to seek out the special spot on the underarm that was the most flexible, the most shuddery, and…the most ticklish. Redemptionheart’s sharp purple eyes were fixated on the cute yellow bear’s face as the closer her single claw got to the most sensitive of the underarm’s most ticklish spot, the more urgent and puffy Trueheart’s cheeks became.

Trueheart didn’t know what was going on, but she had to stop this! If that single claw got any closer to the left and just a tiny bit lower…the area inbetween Trueheart’s legs started to get tingly and all of her legs started to shiver and flinch as pressure started to form. Trueheart hadn’t gone to the bathroom since late evening, and who knows what time it was in this dark cave! Just thinking about what time it could have been just made the tingly pressure skyrocket. Even with the blindfold over her eyes Redemptionheart noticed her forehead having creases and stress sweat appearing on her forehead. The tickler must be getting closer…

Too suddenly though Trueheart opened her mouth and an almost musical sound exploded.

“HehehaaahAHAHAHAAAAAHA!!” Her head tilted to the left and to the right, and she tried to wriggle her arms to try to slow down the intense tickling feelings. Redemptionheart pulled both paws back, puzzled as to why the cute bear lost control so suddenly and with no increasing puffiness on her cheeks…it only took a few seconds for the clever purple bear to figure out that the cute restrained yellow bear was hiding something, something that was close to being discovered. With the laughing fit Redemptionheart’s observing eyes took careful mental notes as one spot just a little lower and to the left of where she had last tickled with her single claw was wriggling and flexing more quickly than other parts of Trueheart’s under arm. That was where IT was. A weakness exposed.

Trueheart laughing died down and she panted for a second before getting out the words, “what do you want Redemptionheart? Why are you doing this?”

“Heh…I’ve kidnapped you and I’m going to keep you down here for months. You’ve done nothing but hog the attention I use to have!! It’s time you learned a lesson to who the superior bear is. That’s why I’m free, and you’re trapped. I’m going to make you suffer Trueheart. All the attention that you stole from me…I’m going to give right back at you tenfold. The attention of me and my toys! You’ll have all the attention you can handle…” A truly evil smile formed on her face and a sharp fang revealed itself as her grin became bigger. “I’m going to TRULY enjoy this Trueheart.”

Wriggling claws frantically tried to pull and struggle now against the restraining cuffs on the arms. She had to get out of here! She couldn’t stay here for months!!!! She could hardly stand being here for just a minute or two…and…and…she really, really needed to…to g-g…go…

Without warning again Redemptionheart poked at her underarm again, but this time, it was right on the worst spot on her underarm!! The soft, sudden tickle immediately caused the poor, helpless bear to have another musical laughter fit.

“HE He-ehehHEAAHAH HA HA AHH!!! Yaa…YAAHAHA…y-y-ou muaaha…must s-staah…haahhaaa…stop i-i-it!!” The pressure inbetween her legs was incredible now and her entire body was squirming, trying to resist the urge to go…go…

Redemptionheart ignored the pitiful plee and knew just by how the body was moving what was happening. The poor dear needed to go to the bathroom. Too bad for her, that would not happen. She wouldn’t let Trueheart go free now, especially when they were having so much fun together!

The kind bear tried, she really did. For an entire minute of nonstop teasing and poking on that special spot the torturous pressure just built and built on top of itself, but then Redemptionheart sped up and teased that special spot and with a laughing squeal Trueheart lost control. The pressure overflowed and she felt herself get damp between her legs and an embarrassed bear tightened her thighs to squeeze them to try to hide the moist wet mark. She couldn’t believe it…she wet herself! Her ribs started to strain and hurt a little as her laughing fit continued. If she continued like this, who knows how much her ribs could take!

Redemptionheart had a look of triumph. That was just the first step…thanks to that weakness exposed, there were more than that to come!

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