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Jay1743

Fratbear/Roni commission from Wolfblade - give me your suggestions!

I'm going to conduct a little experiment in porn-by-committee. My recent Fratbear/Jesse commission included a teaser: "It's not the first time Fratbear's had a run in with a Collins brother that had unexpected results, either. Maybe he'll have better luck with Roni?" I've decided to get a slavestream from Wolfblade and to use part of it to have him draw me a Fratbear/Roni scene. (Beachfox has already given his permission for the idea).

So, I'm throwing open the floor to all of you reading this journal - give me scene ideas. I'm looking for a full scene description, including backstory, caption, and a visual description of the scene which Blade can use to draw. Do you want to see oral, anal, something else? Does Fratbear top Roni? (Or, bizarrely, does Roni top Fratbear???) What kind of positions do you want to see? Facial expressions? Where are they and what are they wearing? Is anyone else present? What other details do you want to see?  (More detail is definitely better than less!)

The primary criteria I will use to judge suggestions is hotness. The secondary criteria are: (A) How funny/witty it is, and (B) does it fit the theme of the series? (The theme of the series is Fratbear's bad luck with the Collins brothers. Fratbear is 0-2 with them. Does Fratbear finally have better luck with Roni? I honestly don't know - that's up to you guys and your ideas).

Feel free copy, expand on, tweak, or otherwise build-off of other peoples' ideas. And please don't get upset if someone does this with your idea. The goal here is collaborate to get the best end result.

To get you guys started, my idea so far - and this is subject to change if someone posts a better idea - is that while at Husky Scout Camp, Roni has a run in with lovable camp counselor Fratbear. The picture is going to be set after the Jesse/Fratbear pic, so Roni will be a bit older than usual (teenager/high school). Visually, I have no idea what it will entail (You tell me!) Or, if you have a better idea with a different backstory/setting, post it.
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Added: 13 years ago
 
CarterWilliams
13 years ago
While I always love to watch Roni get fucked, it would be interesting if he topped. I kind of have a feeling that Roni would know about Fratbear's misconduct. So maybe he's using evidence of it to extort Fratbear into letting him do him. The idea is that Fratbear intends to use Roni, only to end up getting used by him. I can imagine Roni's triumphant expression. XD I think it would be entirely fitting with the theme going on. First he ends up "losing" to Cam, then Jesse is completely unimpressed/disinterested, and now Roni takes what's left of his dignity.
Jay1743
13 years ago
I'm leaning towards having Fratbear top Roni, but I've got an open mind about seeing Roni on top if the right idea comes along. Having Roni top Fratbear would be witty and fit the theme of the series, and could be hot (visual description needed!), but your backstory doesn't really fit their personalities: Blackmailing people into letting him fuck them is not something that Roni would do (he strikes me as a happy-go-lucky bottom). And for reasons that are not quite clear, Fratbear is immune to the consequences of his behavior - he's never been reported to the police (I think it's got something to do with his super-charasmatic personality).
CarterWilliams
13 years ago
Well there are some pics where Roni is asserting dominance, so to speak. They are probably non-canon, so they don't factor into his personality... So yeah, no extorting. Maybe someone else has a good idea on how he would "convince" fratbear to submit. XD
Jay1743
13 years ago
See my reply to twilitsonata below.
RufusTheRat
13 years ago
Roni will never strike me as a serious top. I do like him as a top with the sort of tricky-little-scamp flair to it, but Roni's too cute not to get pounded all the time. Plus, we all know he likes it more, lol.

I really like the idea of Roni at Husky Scout camp, but he seems like he'd be a little old for the scout camp if he was a teenager... that is, unless he's "training new scouts", or "being trained" on how to be a troop leader, or something along the lines of that. (I do not necessarily mean this in a kinky leash/S&M kind of way, unless that is you would like to take it that way as well ;] )

One other idea I have is Roni is about to become a freshman in high school, and he is being recruited by some representative of a school (Fratbear). Naughty times are had as Fratbear "convinces" Roni in a way that only Fratbear can lol. Perhaps some naughty words are exchanged about Roni learning how to "cheer for the Huskies"? (or whatever the high school mascot happens to be)

*shrugs* Those are some of my ideas. Let me know what you think? :3
Jay1743
13 years ago
I agree that it doesn't really make much sense for Roni to be on the bottom - it doesn't really fit his personality or Fratbear's. I don't think teenage Roni would be too old for Husky Scout camp -- Beachfox's pic shows the other scouts to be in their teens. I think a better backstory for husky scouts is that Roni is going for some kind of merit badge (see my description to twilitsonata below).

One other idea I have is Roni is about to become a freshman in high school, and he is being recruited by some representative of a school (Fratbear). Naughty times are had as Fratbear "convinces" Roni in a way that only Fratbear can lol. Perhaps some naughty words are exchanged about Roni learning how to "cheer for the Huskies"? (or whatever the high school mascot happens to be) - high school freshmen being recruited? For what? It would make more sense if he were a senior in high school. Now, the idea of Fratbear as a college sports recruiter is extremely amusing and has lots of potential. It would be been *PERFECT* for my Fratbear/Jesse pic. I'll definitely mention it to Beachfox :)
Munkster
13 years ago
Simple, Cam invited Fratbear over for some reason, maybe a bet that he couldn't make even the youngest member yelp. So Fratbear decides to come over and Meet Roni.
The scene itself is one of Roni on top of Fratbear's cock, and cum splattered along fratbear's crotch. Fratbear is, of course, passed out xp
Simplified, Roni is riding an unconscious Fratbear cowboy style.

Dunno about dialogue... Never my strong suit xp
Jay1743
13 years ago
I really, really like the idea of Roni riding a passed-out Fratbear. It fits their personalities to a tee - Roni, the insatiable little horndog, and Fratbear who likes to top but isn't in the best shape. And of course, it means that Fratbear is 0-3 versus the brothers. I'm not thrilled by your suggested backstory, Cam inviting Fratbear over to have sex with his younger brother. In Oh Brother, Roni makes it a point to keep his sexcapades a secret from his brothers, so it doesn't make sense for Cam to know about it or encourage it.

I think I might combine your picture idea with my husky scouts setting. How about this: Teenage Roni is going for his husky scout merit badge in bear riding (Or perhaps cowboy style? Submissiveness?). Camp counselor Fratbear decided to give him a little extra practice, but unfortunately, Fratbear didn't quite know what he was getting into. Fratbear is passed out on a bed, belly-up, covered in sweat, his tongue lolling out. The viewer sees the scene from over Fratbear's left shoulder. Roni is riding Fratbear's cock cowgirl style, facing out of the page towards the viewer, his hard cock is dripping, and Fratbear's cum splattered down Roni's inner thighs and onto Fratbear's crotch. Fratbear is wearing a husky scouts baseball cap (with HS emblazed on it), and the woggle on Fratbear's neckerchief has a doggie dick and knot on it. Fratbear is wearing a shirt similar to this, while Ron is wearing a shirt and sash ala this. Roni is saying something along the lines of "Awww... that's it?"

What do you think? Are there any details you hate, or which you think are missing?
Munkster
13 years ago
Yea xP sounds great ^_^
CarterWilliams
13 years ago
Dominance through endurance. I like it. I would like to think Roni actually tied him down down, so he could ride him until the bear faints and beyond. XD
FPFP
13 years ago
I think seeing Roni sucking off Fratbear would be pretty nice! And definitely stick with the idea of him as a teenager <3 It would switch things up and make it pretty hot. Also, having Roni look like he's in complete control, even though he's the one giving the blowjob would be pretty hot too
Jay1743
13 years ago
Look at Swampful's suggestion below.
Swampwulf
13 years ago
Young Tyrone, havingmopped up the competition at the High School SCIENCE! Fair ( along with one of the judges, quite accidentally!) has moved on to State finals, which are being held at UCLL this year!

He's very eager, not because he's interested in the Fair, but because this gives him the opportunity to meet his long time inspiration, Professor Lion!
Tyrone is eager to show the Professor his latest, greatest invention, the Mind Control Geek Glasses!
To show how powerful they are, Tyrone has made the Campuses biggest hornball top into a submissive who is eagerly sucking his cock.

This would leave Fratbear with a perfect 0-3 record with the Collins'.
He just can't win.
They truely do seem to be his kryptonite.
Jay1743
13 years ago
Oh wow.... this suggestion so fantastic, I think you broke my brain. I need a couple days to ponder it :)
Swampwulf
13 years ago
*tips cap*
That's what I do, Sir.
I break brains.

It just seemed like a fun way to play with a bunch of the non-canon Wolfblade/Beachfox cross-over stuff without throwing anyone painfully out of character.
FPFP
13 years ago
<3
DarwentheOrca
13 years ago
Oh my stars, what a devious little deviant. >:)
DarwentheOrca
13 years ago
Roni has to top Fratbear. He just the devious little deviant to be able to do it, too.

I liked the original idea that was batted around, where Cam asks FB to babysit the two as a favor. Of course he agrees. He's going to get one of them to whimper and moan, come hell or high water. He decides on Jesse, since he was the most receptive last time.

Fratbear arrives and stuff happens until it's bedtime for Roni. After making Roni brush his teeth then tucking him into bed, he goes back to Jesse in the living room. Roni of course isn't actually tired and sneaks back, staying out of sight.

When FB goes to get him and Jesse a drink, Roni watches as he places something in Jesse's cup. Stealthily, he switches the two drinks when Fratbear's back is turned. They both quickly gulp down their drinks, Jesse excuses himself for bed. Fratbear waits patiently on the couch for the right time, slipping into sleepytime due to the spiked drink.

Roni watches as he drifts off, and makes his move. Poor Fratbear didn't have a chance against the Collins'. The lil tyke rolls him over and proceeds to do him as he wants.

Jay1743
13 years ago
Wow, this is another fantastic suggestion. I need to think about how this would look visually.
DarwentheOrca
13 years ago
I picture Fratbear lying back on the sofa, not quite asleep but the drugging making him very suggestable. Which is why he has an erection, which Roni proceeds to powerbottom.
nekkofox
13 years ago
Roni always seems to get what he wants, inadvertently or intended, and he seems so very comfortable no matter the position. Half naked, fully commando, pants teased down and undies tugged to one side, he doesn't seem like the kind of pup who would say no, even if it were in a public place. Couple that with the fact that Roni has taken big and hard boys for fun, simply because he seems like being drilled, especially since the pup likes the taste of cum. Personally, and though it may seem cliche, I could easily imagine the Campus Ambassador getting a very exciting knew experience with Roni's tongue exploring him under his desk, or, if the pup is limber enough, on all fours in front of the chair but still out of sight whilst the Ambassador struggles to maintain his composure during an interview with the Dean.
nekkofox
13 years ago
Maybe the Dean is talking to him about recent allegations regarding his conduct towards new students. Ha!
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