Inkbunny

Okay!

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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There we go. :)

AerinPierce

7 years ago

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Well now, the first one really has me interested would absolutely love to read the island. As for the lost world could be nifty, I'm not as into dinosaurs but the privacy of the two trying to survive in a long gone world could most certainly make for an interesting read.

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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Well, I'd be uploading these two stories either way. It's just the when that's bothering me. ^^;

AerinPierce

7 years ago

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well, why not one today one later in the week or next week, mean if they are as long as you imply then we'll need time to read through them. That's assuming their done which I get the feeling they are, so I mean why the trepidation over putting them out?

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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That's the thing. They're not done because they span across several years. That means a lot is probably going to happen, which will means they'll take a long time to write.

AerinPierce

7 years ago

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Ah I see, well I mean you wouldn't be the first person to release a long story in parts. Do a year at a time I guess?

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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I could do that. :)

Faennec

7 years ago

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upload them ! please please please please !!

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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@ Faennec

I'll see what I can do! ^^

Faennec

7 years ago

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YAY !

silvershadowhawk

7 years ago

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sounds like some interesting stories X3

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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@ silvershadowhawk

Glad you think so! ^^

Darkravenrose

7 years ago

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I really like the island one.

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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@ Darkravenrose

You're not the only who wants to see that one, so I believe I'll be uploading that one first. ^^

Nobodylikesdinosaursanymore!Why?!D8

AerinPierce

7 years ago

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I like dinosaurs, just not as much as two people alone on an island with nothing but time, and their naughty thoughts.

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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Oh, haha, I see what you mean. >w>

Darkravenrose

7 years ago

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I like dinosaurs but when I think about Sonic running around with a club it just doesn't appeal to me. When I think about the island scenario I think it's funny that Sonic is afraid of water and Shadow has to put up with that.

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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@ Darkravenrose

A club? They're people from modern times trying to survive, so I think Sonic can come up with better defence than that. XD
Clubsbreakbones,though!

Darkravenrose

7 years ago

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Lol! I know.... but when I think dinosaurs I think caveman, and when I think caveman I think club. And the more I think about it, I can see Sonic running around in a loincloth too. Lol but now that I'm on the subject Shadow would be the one with the club.

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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@ Darkravenrose

If it makes you feel better, I try to keep this fic scientifically accurate. :'D Which means no cavemen and only dinosaurs from the period I put those two hedgies in. :'D
And, well, admittedly I've written Shadow a bit out of character for this fic. ^^; 'Cause he's not the Ultimate Lifeform in it. ^^;

BlazePyro

7 years ago

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I like both summaries but between the two it's the island that win. It Gives a lot of freedom, and I also love that they are in canon. Ultimate life form stranded with sonic the hero of mobius! I get it that it would take a while to write these two as it seem to both have a heavy depth story. But if u post island I really hope u keep their personalities as long as possible. Forced to work together and shadow not complete ready to express his feelings perhaps. So many possibilities! But yeah the other one is cool too! I like dinos too! Overall would love to see both but I can fully understand that it might take a long while to do that. So for ur own sake stick with one. But that's up to u ^^

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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I'll try to keep them in canon, but I do seem to be stuck within my own 'canons' of Sonic and Shadow. I'll try, but there's been some non-canon personality here and there, especially coming from Shadow since he's stuck on an Island all alone with no one but his crush. XD Shenanigans might ensue. XD
And well, the time spend alone with Sonic will make Shadow ready for it.Otherwise Rouge wouldn't have send him off on that trip. XD

BlazePyro

7 years ago

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Yeah true I just meant that he wouldn't just throw himself at sonic because they had bigger problems and the last thing Shadow would like is both rejection and danger. But yeah I get ya, surprised Shadow would tell rouge his feelings. Unless he really is desperate. Shadow is kinda patient with everything but yeah maybe it's different to emotions.

Did rouge trick him to go on the trip or something ? Kinda sounds like it when u said she wanted to send him off alone with sonic. Sonic is doomed to get together with shadow....I mean...there is only one chilidog on the island ;)

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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Oh no! No hedgehogs will be throwing themselves at the other! XD I was thinking of more subtle things. Like a smile, or just spending time together, or just keeping eachother warm during cold and rainy evenings and whatnot. ^^ Nothing too over the top. XD
Well, the way I see it, Shadow and Rouge are the kinds of best friends who would either tell eachother the nastiest details, make fun of eachother should one make a mistake, or tell their feelings to in case they need a listening ear. Or that's the kind of best friends they are in my canon. In my canon, they are close.

Rouge didn't really trick him. She just convinced him that this would be the best opportunity to tell Sonic and, well, the blue blur is aware of it himself as he can just sorta tell by now when someone has a crush on him or not. PlusRougetoldhim.
Oh yush, only one sausage and one bun on the entire island to put it in. ;D
Chaos, what did I just write?

BlazePyro

7 years ago

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Rofl! Yes!! Well I like ur canon aswell. Thanks for clearing that up^^ but meanie rouge tell sonic! Privacy! I would get mad if my friends did that. Plus is sonic is interested and knowing shadow likes him both by rouge and behavior. Then why doesn't he act !? XDshouldnt question this before u even released it XD btw what did u think of....the endless....ideas....

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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I'm glad you like my canon. XD

It will be briefly explained in the fic, but I'll just say now too. XD Sonic got convinced by Rouge to give Shadow the opportunity to work up the courage to come clean himself. She believed it would help him as Shadow has nill social skills or knowledge on how to act on his feelings properly. So she sort off saw a teachable moment. ^^ Sonic doesn't particularly like Shadow that way yet, but as Shadow is a friend, will give him the time he needs to confess.

Oh, I loved reading your ideas! ^^ Absolutely loved it! ^^

BlazePyro

7 years ago

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True, while that is a good idea I hope sonic doesn't plan on rejecting him. Or he get chaos blasted! I doubt Shadow could handle a rejection. He have such a sad past and probably sensitive about opening up.

I am glad to hear that! Took me a while to write it all in total XD but the result was kinda good I think. Although I noticed my phone did autocorrects I didn't see until sent. I hoped u understood anyways....well I will add the rest I had in mind then.

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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Well, Shadow is the only other hedgehog on the Island. If anything, seeing some new and surprising sides to him will make Sonic grow infatuated with him. ^^

Oh, don't worry, I understood! ^^ And I'm excited to read what else you had in mind! ^^

BlazePyro

7 years ago

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Ooh interesting ! Well I guess this time sonic isn't going to go...fast ;)

Finished it eventually but man that took another long portion of text. Wanted to explain the weakness and strength of the added stuff. ^^

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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Oh no, he'll take his time wooing his 'lady'. ;D And when all alone in their makeshift hut, I'm sure Sonic won't be going all too fast then either. >u>

I loved it! ^^

BlazePyro

7 years ago

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Not that shadow couldn't keep up. The ultimate life form~

Yay, I do feel I put the most time on that one out of them all. Plus I am sure u could make that plot downright epic. Loved the conlony survival part. The rest too obv but it was different to what you have done before. Me like!

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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Of course, Shadow can keep up! Doesn't mean Sonic won't try harder, though. >u>

Well, your first story idea was very interesting. ^^ I will try my best to make it as good as you made it sound. X3
And that is probably why that part took the longest to write! Because I've never done it before. XD

BlazePyro

7 years ago

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Well it paid off though, plus kinda challenged urself in a way. So the result comes out very satisfying.

SonadowKokoro100

7 years ago

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