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SonadowKokoro100

Decisions, Decisions, Decisions,

So I have this idea for a story. Yes, it is Shadow Mpreg and aliens once again, like a Captain I'm staying onboard this sinking ship until I drown, but I find myself to be unable to make certain decisions concerning this particular fic. I was hoping you guys could help me decide because the person who used to help me decide is unavailable due to certain circumstances. :c

Basically the Black Arms invade Mobius right when Shadow is heavily pregnant, has no mate, and is close to labour. He is completely at their mercy. That is the gist of this story.

Do I use:
- Ultimate Lifeform Shadow: 4
Or
- Normal Shadow: 4

What'll happen to the baby:
- Nothing? (Which doesn't mean no alien broods.): 1
Or
- Turned into a Black Arms half-breed: 7

And finally:
- Do I make these two separate stories: 3
Or
- Just keep it at one: 3
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Added: 7 years ago
 
jessicashadow
7 years ago
Mmm how about normal Shadow, and the baby turns into a Black Arms half-breed?
This could be a really interesting story on it's own but I can see two good stories here from those options =D
Shadowluver1242
7 years ago
Ultimate, black arms half-breed, one lol I hope that helps! Just my opinion of course :)
Darkravenrose
7 years ago
Normal, halfbreed, one. :)
Carra
7 years ago
Ultimate Lifeform Shadow kinda sounds better to me. As for the baby...Black Arms halfbreed.
And I think two separate stories would be really interesting.
BlazePyro
7 years ago
Cool another alien fanfic from u! I love them so much XD it's like you basing it on horror stories then the good stuff to contrast it. I vote turned into black arm! So Shadow is normal obv at the start then change due to whatever reason in mind. Which could affect the child aswell. I like your alternatives, while I take those as the top.
It's a shame whomever you are co-op with isn't around :(
Is that why your releases less frequently ? But then again...I remember you being a multitasker. Write more stories at once XD besides I noticed you made a few updates on fanfic account. I prob should take that back! But that recent alien story was just WOW! I can totally understand you making another. Must have been lots of fun just writing it^^

Wondering! This person u speak of do u work the same way we did back in the days? Or simply sharing ideas ? I will soon reply to u on the fanfic btw. Just got sidetracked!



SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
Yush, another alien fanfic from me! >:D And hopefully this one won't take as long to write as 'Part of the Colony' did. :'D
I think I do take a lot of inspiration from horror movies and stories and whatnot, although I don't watch it as much. XD

Your votes have been noted. ^^ Normal Shadow turned Black Arms it is. XD And yush, I do have certain reasons in mind. >u>
And you're right, the mother turning would also affect the child.

Yeah, she's sort off going through some stuff and is being a bit absent. I just wish she'd talk to me about them. :/

Actually, my releases have been more frequent actually. Both here and on DA/FF.Net. I've gotten a bit of my inspiration back. XD
That recent alien story took a long ass time to write! XD But it was fun nonetheless. ^^ I think I actually got the inspiration from watching a let's play of 'Alien: Isolation'.

I have actually strayed far away from RPs, though some stubborn people still ask me about doing them, even though I've mentioned once or twice that I don't like doing that anymore. ;-;
My friend and I just shared ideas and tell eachother what we think and help come up with titles or make decisions related to the plot. Beta-reading too.
BlazePyro
7 years ago
Well came to think of, did you solo the colony story then? Because yeah 93K...I am happy if I reach 3k! But then again it's never a one shot. But I can't top u! Usually I would vote for shadow ultimate life form but I really like ur options to much. Hard decisions! It makes sense although the egg already have its DNA but I am sure that would get corrupted by alien influences.

Awe that's a shame :(

Yeah I take back my comment about ur less frequently one! U never read that!

Same, I get asked too but meh! Even if I did then it prob wouldn't be as good as the ones we did anyways. But the problem with Rps is the lack of plot. Commonly running blind at times which was annoying XD
Also most ppl tend to do that simple rp which is boring. So yeah I prefer co-op a story since it's focused on a plot and ideas not made within two seconds.
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
I did write it solo. I write all of my fics solo. I just sometimes ask help making decisions and whatnot. ;u; But when my stories are Multi-chaptered they are either at least 10kB (on DA and FF.Net) or 40Kb (on Inkbunny).

Yush, there were some very hard decisions to make because I like both and simply could not decide between either. XD
Though the child is already half Shad and half whoever knocked him up, it could get corrupted by that foreign DNA.

Yeah, it is. :/

Haha, I did read that. I just decided to conveniently leave that out. :D

Yeah, unfortunately, my replies are short and not at all indepth simply because I don't like to put energy in RPs. ^^;
Not just the lack of plot, but sometimes also the way other people write other characters. I like my Sonics and Shadows a certain way, it's how I write them in my fics, but I like them closer to their canon versions instead of the complete opposites they are supposed to be. People often tend to write them like that.
I like Shadow to be a little edgy as opposed to not edgy at all or just way too edgy. A.K.A Shadow blushing all the time for no particular reason or Shadow hating the entire world when clearly canon Shadow does not.
Eh, I'm currently doing a co-op fic because a long-time friend asked me, one that has nothing to do with Sonadow, but I find myself to be able to work better on my own. XD
Faennec
7 years ago
ultimate life form shadow
turned into a black arms half-breed
two separate stories

good luck hun ^^
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
Haha, okay. Literally no one likes to keep the baby normal. XD And here I was worried people might think I'm cruel for even suggesting it! :'D

And thanks!
silvershadowhawk
7 years ago
I'd say ultimate life form Shads, the halfbreed baby, n' one story set works for me ^^
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
Okiedokie! ^^
Merriollo
7 years ago
I'd kinda like to see normal Shadow. And keep the baby normal, too. Maybe make it two separate stories.
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
You are literally the first one to suggest to keep the baby normal, thank Chaos! :'D
Merriollo
7 years ago
Well, I just don't like the thought of the baby being a halfbreed period...unless, of course, it starts out that way when it's first conceived, and as you've already mentioned, Shadow's already close to labor when the Black Arms invade. Just my personal opinion, that's all. Besides, I'm curious to see how else things might play out if the baby stays normal.
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
I see where you're coming from. Having an unborn change is indeed the stuff of horrors and I also had doubts about making the change an options at all. But this story isn't supposed to end badly for the child, if that worries you. :)
One of the two stories will have the child stay normal. ^^
Merriollo
7 years ago
More than it just being my opinion, it's actually because of Shadow that I voted to keep the baby normal. In all honesty, I'm all for torturing my favorite hedehog in any and all ways possible, and as far as I'm concerned, since it's Shadow, the possiblities are practically endless, but transforming his baby into one thing when it's already been conceived as another combined with whatever else he'll be going through...it might send him too far over the edge, if you ask me.

If the story was meant to be focused more on the baby, though, I'd have chosen differently, regardless of my opinion on the matter...or my feelings for Shadow.

Looking forward to it either way, though! ;D
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
You're right, having the baby stay the same might help him through whatever I'll be putting him through in the fic. If I do change it, especially when a non-Ultimate Lifeform Shad suddenly has his life turned upsidedown in such an unreal way, it just might make him lose his sanity. So you're correct in thinking this way. ^^

I'm glad you're looking forward to it! ^^
Merriollo
7 years ago
Yeah, I think Shadow would be traumatized enough as it is...and being pregnant, he'd already be stressed and his emotions would be going haywire. Stress + erratic emotions + trauma does not sound like a pleasant experience. But it does make a very interesting story.

I'm so excited to read it that I could hardly sleep last night. I just couldn't stop thinking about how it'll turn out. Call me loony, but when it comes to stories...I'm kinda psychic...
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
Yeah, you're right. That would be more than traumatising enough as it is. ^^;

Oh, I see. ^^; Actually, I have been working on the Ultimate Lifeform version first as I have a feeling the one with normal Shadow will be a bit longer. ^^;
Merriollo
7 years ago
Yeah, don't wanna go overboard with the Shadow torture.

Probably should've kept that info to myself, huh? I don't wanna weird anyone out.
That sounds like a good idea to me. It's always best to get the shorter stories done first...that way, there's more time to do the longer ones.
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
Yeah, I agree. There needs to be a limit. ^^;

You didn't weird me out at all, actually. Don't know where you could've gotten that from.
Merriollo
7 years ago
If you knew me in person, I can gaurantee you'd be surprised that I said that...when it comes to torturing my favorite characters, I tend to be downright evil.

It's just a little difficult to figure out someone's reaction over the internet, that's all.
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
So? I can be pretty harsh to. The proof is in my fics. ^^;

Yeah, it kind is. ^^;
Which is probably why we have emojis.
Merriollo
7 years ago
Hmm...I'll have to check them out, then.

I guess that's true.
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
I think you may already have? I don't know. ^^; People complain I write too many dark stories. XD They miss happy endings. XD

Yeah. ^^
Merriollo
7 years ago
You mean the new one you posted...Part Of The Colony, right? No, I haven't read it, or any others, yet.
Too many dark stories? Is that even possible?
SonadowKokoro100
7 years ago
Eh, nope, not 'Part of The Colony'. That is where people have mentioned they're glad to see a less depressing story from me. :'D
Merriollo
7 years ago
Oh...yeah, I guess I would've known that if I'd read it.
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