I first want to say thanks to all the people reading my story. However, I noticed that people didn't say if my writing is good or not. That's not to say I am not greatful for the favs and stuff like that. If anyone could find time and tell me what I need to improve I will be very happy. I take criticism better than you think.
Anyway so the next chapter parts will be longer and more gamer and geeky with some naughty stuff thrown in for good measure. I will also introduce more antagonists in this chapter. This is to bring out the characters unique way of dealing with situations. Mike will be the main antagonist for this story I a writing. (Random fact Resident Evil 7 is fucking amazing) If anyone haseen a suggestion on what other characters I should add, feel free to pm me otherwise every chapter will be written and posted as I see fit. Once again suggestions are welcomed.
On the gamer side of thing (not going to talk about the Super Bowl any more. So passed the fuck off!) In between the time I work and attend college I have been playing some Resident Evil 7, I am stuck at the part where the woman is chasing through one part of the cabin. I keep hiding in spots that haggard bitch walks. I played a bit of Final Fantasy 15. I apprehended the general after he kills the boys father but the bast ardent ran off and this woman comes out of nowhere and attacks me. Surprises at every corner. My main crack however is Titanfall 2. So addicted to this game it's not even funny. O_O.
Anyway new chapter will hopefully be up next Sunday since I studied enoughave to where I am confident I can pass this exam.
Peace!
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