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AlexReynard

New Chapter - Book Five begins

'Allright... where am I now?'

One thing he knew without even opening his eyes: this place was hot. The ground felt like slapping his hands down on a car that'd been driving all day. Toby was surrounded on all sides by dried-out dirt the color of a lion's pelt. Occasional plants polka-dotted the place, like shriveled corsages.

He was in a military graveyard. But not for people. For vehicles. This place was so huge it hurt his imagination. Looking straight ahead, he could see for miles. Uncountable dead hulks of fighter planes, cargo planes, bombers, jeeps, trucks, boats, and even tanks. All of them were skeletons. Every useful part had been salvaged, and the carcasses were dropped in the desert to rot. There were gaping, battered fuselages that looked like the world's biggest caterpillars had been chewing through. Toby could see through long-shattered windows into empty cockpits. Leather seats decomposed to ribbons.  There were ranks of pockmarked, wheelless jeeps. An invasion force for zombie soldiers. The odor of rust was strong.

Toby was completely alone out here. In this mass grave of metal, the mouse was a speck.


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Jesus flipping Christ, this has been a long time coming. I feel like I'm knocking the dust off a crypt.

My sincerest apologies to all of you I've kept waiting. I didn't want to stop writing, but life coldcocked me. My family pretty much fell apart. You guys don't need the details, but suffice to say it was very ugly, and it's over. I'm finally back at a place where I can reserve most of my headspace for my characters and not myself.

I'm going to finish this story no matter what new hells get thrown at me.
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Added: 7 years, 4 months ago
 
MrZero
7 years, 4 months ago
If he was looking straight ahead, either that was one long unbroken view, or he'd stood up by then. Was he looking under the cars, and there was a unusual straight-line clearance? Assuming all the airplanes were miles away from him, or see-through like a Flintstones ribcage. Shouldn't he be wandering around to see inside the vehicles? Since you can't trust anything in a Alex Renard fic, you'd need to know if he was walking, or if he'd woken up in a airplane boneyard with an Avro Arrow in each knee. Go lay down in a parking lot and there's a short distance view.
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I don't know what happened, but I hope you're OK.
AlexReynard
7 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, he'd stood up in the paragraph before this.

And I'm good now. Writing is proof of it!
Blackraven2
7 years, 4 months ago
JunkBox
7 years, 4 months ago
...was exactly my thought! Actually, caterpillars might be neater about their munching.
AlexReynard
7 years, 4 months ago
Yup! Was inspired by this pic: http://www.popsci.com/sites/popsci.com/files/styles/la... Might even be the same location.
Blackraven2
7 years, 4 months ago
Definitely IS the same location ;)

https://www.google.com/maps/@32.1530287,-110.826746,198...

and by the looks of it it didn't change too much. There's a few planes missing here and a few added ones there. Still, there is some flux. Those planes are not dumped for all eternity, eventually the reaper comes for them to recycle raw materials.

Or if they are lucky, some AF maintenance guys or someone from a museum come with a shopping list for structural spare parts. Even though 40,50 years out of production some of these models are still in operation somewhere. So if you need a spare, the boneyard is the the only place to go :)

I'm sure with enough patience and tools you could build yourself quite some neat flying machines with all that stuff. Being set out there with enough water, a forklift and a wrench might be close to being in heaven for some people.
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