And have prepared them for posting on SoFurry, which I'll do tomorrow night.
Thing is, the titular "transcendental" terrorist of the first story wasn't actually a transcendentalist in my mind. He was something else, something else I wanted to criticize. But I was just a teensy, tiny bit afraid of doing this openly.
But you know what? Fuck it! I'm going to tell this story in other places, I should tell it the way it was meant to be told. That means making James Lewiss, in the story, what he was in my head.
This has led to the first Foreboding Future story being renamed, and of the post-climax conversation being nearly rewritten.
I've also tweaked a bunch of other very minor details.
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