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Melkiah

Watchers, Announcement!

Please favorite, comment and share with me your thoughts on my latest piece.

I work very hard on the pieces I do and they never quite make it to the popular section, and I really could use some extra people to reach X.X

I don't feel like sharing my works with people who don't really say anything about them ya know :/

PLEASE <3

Please feel free to critique as well! I love that it's how I grow!
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Added: 5 years, 1 month ago
 
zephyrnok
5 years, 1 month ago
Popularity is weird! It's a good piece, in my opinion, though a bit of anatomy issues that (my inexperienced in art self) see.  

His right hind-leg looks twisted a bit at an awkward angle and appears a little flat, in my opinion.  This is in comparison to the left hind-leg, of course.

I'm not sure if he's supposed to be a feral or digigrade-anthro, but if he's the former then the human-esque paws look a little strange (disregard if he's the latter~).

I like the spooge quite a bit, but where it's landed on his right pec/chest it seems more like it is hovering there, rather than resting atop it (dunno how to fix, though).

Your lines are nice and easy on the eyes, too!

Again, I'm by no means an artist, so if you feel like whatever you did is better than my suggestions, then take your word (or another commentor's) for it~
Melkiah
5 years, 1 month ago
Thank you for your critique. I've talked to a few people and the leg fluff really distorted the view on the legs X.X

Thanks for the compliments on the lines!
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