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Kaheiyattsu

A story that made me sad.

I was browsing random stories to read and was reading a rather good one. But the end of it made me sad, the main character died at the end, it's not the fact that he died it's the way he died. The story made him seem like he had so much hope of surviving and BAM he dies right at the end.

It just made me sad that it seemed he was gunna make it through then is suddenly murdered at the end. I mean it wouldn't have made me sad if he had no hope and just died instead of leadin me on to a happy ending the ending it so suddenly and tragicly. And by a character he thought was his friend.
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Added: 7 years, 5 months ago
 
TorryEllis
7 years, 5 months ago
I thought you didn't like to read, though?
Kaheiyattsu
7 years, 5 months ago
Was bored >w<
TorryEllis
7 years, 5 months ago
You coulda red my little story I wrote on FA. XP It's got a VERY happy ending.
Kaheiyattsu
7 years, 5 months ago
I don't mind sad endings. Just as long as you expect them. I don't like being led on like then ending was gunna be happy.
TorryEllis
7 years, 5 months ago
Who does? It's like a friend telling you to find something in a picture, only to find out it's a screamer.
Gobby
7 years, 5 months ago
Link?  :3
Kaheiyattsu
7 years, 5 months ago
I'd have to look for it again.
Nopast
7 years, 5 months ago
sadly, that's how it can end. no matter how much hope, at times it won't safe ya.
Sunkra
7 years, 5 months ago
But at least it sounds like that story made an impact on you and made you think deeper upon it, that's what I as a fellow writer would call a success. :)
ArtemisVulpes
7 years, 5 months ago
What a twist! *gives a hug to the sad puppy*
TheTatteredKitty
7 years, 5 months ago
*Hugs Tight*
I's Knows Wes Dun Talks Mush, Buts.... I's Just Wants Yous Tos Knows Yer Shtill Families.... K's?
a Big Bwuder.... Nuffins Gonna Change Hows I's Feels Bouts Dats.

Were Alls Familys, Yous Mes And Evwy Ones Dats Left A Coments Heres. Famlies....

*Hugs Tight*
PrysmTKitsune
7 years, 5 months ago
Not just stories, but movies do that sorta shit sometimes too...it seems a charicter who was going to die is saved, then sudenly they die anyway...movie makers seem to think its 'suspensfull' me...i have another word for it...annoying...either the charicter is going to die or they arnt...pick one *grumbles*
Kaitos
7 years, 5 months ago
I hope to God that you werent talking about Tai's Story, because I just checked my notices before I checked my new submissions.  I just checked it though, and the last chapter is out...

That story is awesome and I really hope you didnt just ruin it...  (well not ruin the story, but the ending)
Kaitos
7 years, 5 months ago
Nevermind that last comment.  I read it (and also noticed the times that the submissions were entered) and saw that you were not talking about that story.  
Sorry if I came off as rude.  It's just that the story is months and months in the making, and I could not accept knowing what happened without reading it for myself.
RileyHyena
7 years, 4 months ago
This reminds me of the boy in the striped pajamas
TheDreamlord
7 years, 4 months ago
You should read the Bartimaeus Trilogy!
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