You have NO idea how much it took out of me to do this chapter the first time. It took just as much to re-do it.
Changes:
1) Voice of Grizz is now being done by sk-1 instead of sounding like Dipper's Evil Twin. 2) Birch's lines have all been re-read, to get a better initial recording. 3) Stargazer's lines, ditto.
Oddly, with these changes, the chapter is now a minute shorter than it was before.