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Shouk

What you think about my art? o3o

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I'm curious.

What you guys think about my art?  
And did you think if i had any improvement in my art along the year?
If there's theres something i should try or have to improve in my art what will be?

Btw what you guys like the most about my art?
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Added: 5 years, 6 months ago
 
NeksusCat
5 years, 6 months ago
It's adorable, cute and sweet in many levels! ^w^ You do improved, from the first time i've seen it, but i'm sure, you could do even better! You need to try and draw more back grounds to your works, so you'll make them perfect!

I just love that tiny, smooth details in your art and how really smooth all in it goes~<3 >^w^<
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
lw\ Thank you! >w> Background my worst enemy, i have to face it <w>
NeksusCat
5 years, 6 months ago
Let's face it together! <w> Wait, where is it?! >w<
LunatheDusky
5 years, 6 months ago
always love your work....wish i were as good as you ^^
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
;w; Thank you Artemis
Kitani
5 years, 6 months ago
It's got a heart and soul of it's own... A distinct sort of feeling to it.

I know that artists are inspired and take in inspiration from those around them at times, but your art definitely stands out as your own, to me. I like it when artists really manage to smooth out a style for themselves.

Keep up the awesome work~! I'm enjoying it a lot!

~Kit

(As an after thought... I don't really have anything in the line of "constructive criticism" to say. I only relatively recently started following your stuff, so I can't really comment much on it like that! Sorry. ~.~)
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
Thank you Kitani çwç

( ówò It's okay )
DARKZADAR
5 years, 6 months ago
you are doing great !
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
Thanks
DARKZADAR
5 years, 6 months ago
you are welcome !
imer
5 years, 6 months ago
the lack of cookies is disturbing :D

No seriously, you are a great artist and I couldn't think of much to improve - maybe do more backgrounds, but thats about it :)
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
xD Hehe Thanks, <w> heh backgrounds... i need face it my worst enemy >:3
liontaro
5 years, 6 months ago
it is unique, sexy and cute. all at the same time. :3
about the style change: i noticed that your characters got a little more chibi-like touch along the year. i dunno, they just look cuter to me now, maybe even a bit smaller :P
but that's certainly not a bad thing. i really adore your style very much~
should you improve your art? that's a question you have to ask to yourself, not to us. we're not the ones to tell you how you should draw your pics.
THIS is how you draw, so keep drawing like it. and when you feel like trying to improve it somehow, then try it. but if you're satisfied with the way you draw, then i'd definitely say keep drawing like that ;3 *hugs* <3
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
Thank you LionTaro-sensei, ;w;
I'll keep it on mind
Zeikcied
5 years, 6 months ago
Your art is really cute.  And for me, cute + sexy = awesome.
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
xD Thank you Zeikcied
bloodgod250
5 years, 6 months ago
Idk what improvements you can make but I do like your art though
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
Thanks ;3
Talbotlynx
5 years, 6 months ago
Been a bit too deep in my own stuff and haven't been watching you all that long, so can't give a fair assessment on growth over the year. I can say what I like though.

Your work has a distinct feel in the lines and how you display the proportions of the subjects. Your work is on the list of items where I can point and say who drew something, whether I've seen it in a gallery or not.
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
Thank you Talbotlynx
Azadeth
5 years, 6 months ago
I think it's awesome and I love it. That's all :p
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
:3 Thank you Azadeth
Penelle
5 years, 6 months ago
I feel like your characters are very mathematical in that they seem to have a lot of really precise lines which sometimes makes me think of them as inorganic despite being anatomically sound.  Seems like lots of straight lines and hard angles, but that is just my personal observation.  It's very well done all the same.  Where I think you could strive to be better as an artist is that it appears to me that you do a lot of the same body types.  Maybe you could try branching into different weights, proportions, and wild expressions just to stretch those muscles?  Trying to emulate someone else's style could also be an exercise to help you break the mold a little.  Seriously though, what a solid mold it is!  Your work is straight up awesome, and it is really hard to find flaws in it!
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
hmm i see , ill try it someday

and thank you btw. :)
Mythterious
5 years, 6 months ago
Dude, your arts are awesome!

I would, however, like to see more "finished" art from you. (Like, full color and shading) But that's just me. :D
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
hehe Thanks man xD
Catwheezle
5 years, 6 months ago
I hate to ask questions and have people address only one of them, so I'll try to tackle them all.

" What you guys think about my art?


I do love your art, especially the inks. I'm a total fanboy for good lines! :D

" And did you think if i had any improvement in my art along the year?

This may be because I am mostly art-ignorant, but looking over your gallery, I can't see a *huge* difference between the oldest and the newest - proportions and perspective and control of line seem about equally competent and assured at the oldest and newest. There don't seem to be many pieces that felt like you were really reaching outside your comfort zone to draw: instead, they felt like you are drawing art because it's what you love doing, rather than because you were seeking to stretch yourself and improve.

The pics of the Angry Molesting Tree was perhaps the rare exception here - they felt like you were reaching beyond your normal style. I am afraid I cannot put my finger on why, but this is why I favorited both of these.


" If there's theres something i should try or have to improve in my art what will be?


It depends on your preferences for your personal style.

As an example, your style is very anime - limbs have taper, and a little curve, but not a lot of definition. More anatomically-aware art, where you define the muscles, show tendons stretching and muscles cramping, might be something to try for, or might be a bad deviation from your personal style and the art you want.

So, the question is more: how close is your art to how you envisage it in your head; and what can you do to get it closer to that ideal in your mind?
More detailed shading?
More detailed anatomy?
More stylised, simplistic art that does more with fewer brushstrokes?
More detail on the backgrounds?

None of these are really improvements, though - they're just stylistic changes, and stretching yourself out of your comfort zone to try different things, which are not necessarily BETTER things: is it better to draw a seagull with one expressive brushstroke, or to pick out the fine details of shading on its feathers? Both can be great art.

To make your art more appealing to me... I'm easy! Just be naughtier in topic, and tell more stories through your art :P

" Btw what you guys like the most about my art?


Well, the naughtiness - it's what I come to Inkbunny for! I love your loli cubs, and what they get up to.

That, and that your pictures often tell a story: you can tell a lot about what has happened, and what will happen, from what IS happening in the story. Good examples of this kind of storytelling:
This is what happens to naughty fuskybutts... by Shouk

Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
Thank you for the clarifying comment    ;w;
I'll keep it in mind
Lestria
5 years, 6 months ago
I think you rate alongside Aogami and RisingDragon as one of the top three artists I'm watching in your style.

I think you are improving, do you? It's hard to say just how much, but it is noticeable.

I'd ask for more details, but everyone asks for that.

I like the way you do expressions, often with very few lines, but the emotion is always vivid. https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=289068 https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=366244 https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=333548  https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=326002
I like the way you pick colors, I love the ways you treat sex and pose characters.  I love your Original Characters, my favorite three are Tara, Naty and Fran. I think all your OCs should have a page like Tara's, seeing things like Naty's complete body pattern would be interesting. I like Emma a lot, but you have other pretty girls to play with too, give them more exercise. Saving-up for a date with Tara, that may include Naty or Fran in the future.  I like Your adoptables too, do more for fun and profit. Oh, Maya says 'Hi'. Still trying to figure-out how to commission a set of other species in her original pose. Maya found my cherished image of Rin https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=289068 and thinks I can ask to date her like Tara, but It's hard to tell her she's not yours just because you drew her. Yet the more I think of it, the more I may try to set-up what she wants by summer, permission pending.
Anyway, love your art, it's a nice ride watching you.
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
Well thank you Lestria, hmm i think ill make a pool about my characther to be draw >w>
MakoRuu
5 years, 6 months ago
I like your style. It's unique. Like mine. ;3

The worst thing you can do is try to compare yourself to other artists like I do.

I'm always trying to improve because I see all these artists who are so good. (You for example.)

I'm stuck between being a cartoonist.. And being a manga artist (Whatever they're called.)

So my art comes out really... awkward sometimes. But you - You have your own style and I like it.
Shouk
5 years, 6 months ago
Yeah... i do that sometimes  to compare with other artists...

And Thank you btw çwç
MakoRuu
5 years, 6 months ago
You're welcome, my friend.
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