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CreamSonicfan

A Week Babysitting

This was meant to be a three chapter story, but I had the internet out for a day and just wrote more of this story.
Long story short, it's now a four part story, I've done three parts and I'm not entirely happy with the ending the story yet.
This may turn into a long story indeed, I was thinking of having a 'Results of Babysitting' story (hadn't really decided on a name yet, but this is an accurate way of putting it), in which I visit the two and their relationship after Max babysits Tanya.
I don't want to ruin anything so I'll stop there, but anyway I was thinking maybe I'll just make more parts until I feel the story has reached a satisfying end.
So anyway, I want to know what you all think about it.
By the way I'll post the next part later tonight, after I give it a quick once over for and problems and such.
The third one might come out right after, or I may wait until tomorrow, but I'll make a pool or whatever it's called for them so people can have easier access to them all.  

P.s. I decided to make Max a Koala after all, and I even used that to my advantage.
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Added: 5 years, 6 months ago
 
shadow1482
5 years, 6 months ago
I like your story so far and cant wate to read more.
CreamSonicfan
5 years, 6 months ago
Thank you very much, I have more, but I'm not happy with most of the next part.
Once I work past it and rewrite some of it I'll put it up straight away I've just been a little busy lately, still it should be here by the end of the week. (No promises, I never make a promise that I have any doubt about).
Anyway, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and more than anything, I hope my ending is satisfying for you.
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