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RoobieDoo

What's Next?

Well, I believe I've come a long way since first writing Jack's Big Day, and so have my characters. Now, I think this story could go anywhere, so I want to know where you guys think it should go. What's next for Jack, Melanie, and Liz? Is Liz going to have to go home after spring break? If not, how is she going to stay? If so, who would replace her (one watcher suggested a lemur girl) What have I not covered that you'd like to see? (Note: I won't write gay erotica. No offense to any gay guys, but that's just not what I'm about)

Alternately, I was thinking of writing other stories unrelated to Jack's world also, but am not sure what. I have some ideas, but they are pretty vague.

So, what do y'all think? Let me know 8^)
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Added: 7 years, 5 months ago
 
Munashi
7 years, 5 months ago
Jack takes Liz to the aquarium for her last day before she has to leave, and they get to play with the dolphins, eels and octopus... >=3
RoobieDoo
7 years, 5 months ago
ah, a little tentacle action, eh? That was one of the ideas I was thinking of writing as a seperate story about a girl encountering some sort of octopus, maybe she worked at an aquarium and stayed late to do some clean up and runs into the creature. >:)

munch631
7 years, 5 months ago
Whats with you and these sea creatures
Munashi
7 years, 5 months ago
What's with you and you not being with these sea creatures? =3
munch631
7 years, 5 months ago
No I love sea creatures and that just i just don't like to see too many of them and I have read quite a bit of them
munch631
7 years, 4 months ago
I have an idea but its not that good..... Where Jack sneeks into Melanies house while they are asleep and has fun with them
RoobieDoo
7 years, 4 months ago
Why would you say that's not a good idea? I think I could open with that one in the next chapter. Jack will be getting home late, after all ;)
munch631
7 years, 4 months ago
I don't really like the idea too much but if it works in the next one then it will more than likely be amazing
munch631
7 years, 4 months ago
" munch631 wrote:
I don't really like the idea too much but if it works in the next one then it will more than likely be amazing
Sorry that isn't how I ment to say it, I just didn't think you would like the idea but if you do go and use it dude
RoobieDoo
7 years, 4 months ago
ah, understood :)
climon
7 years, 4 months ago
Well we dabbled into Liz just finding out that anal might be nice. I think popping her anal cherry is a must. Along with maybe pleasing jack with a tiger and a bunny tongue on his own.  I'm not to big of a fan of the sea creature idea...I just like fur better I guess.  But what ever you write will be good!
RoobieDoo
7 years, 4 months ago
yea, Liz's ass is definetly on the ajenda

Not quite sure what you mean when you say "pleasing jack with a tiger and a bunny tongue on his own" could you elaborate?
climon
7 years, 4 months ago
Oh sorry, meaning the give him a rim job, or something to return the favor. Or something like that :) Jack could even bring in a new friend, a virgin who gets to be a first timer to the girls too. The possibilities are endless..lol
RoobieDoo
7 years, 4 months ago
Yea, I think another guy should be introduced too
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