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¿What Draws You To My Stories?

Yes, even this old mutt needs one of those self-serving, ego-boosting validations every now and then, so... for those few who read my stories and also look at my journal I ask what drew you to my work?

___ The art in my gallery (by other people since I can't draw)
___ The quality of my writing
___ Watersports
___ The sex scenes
___ The worlds & societies I create
___ BDSM
___ Torture & Mutilation
___ Teens
___ My fursona
___ Someone else's fursona in my stories
___ One of my co-writers
___ Scat
___ Other (please elaborate and don't be shy)

And then, what turns you off about my work?
___ The art in my gallery (by other people since I can't draw)
___ The quality of my writing
___ Watersports
___ The sex scenes
___ The worlds & societies I create
___ BDSM
___ Torture & Mutilation
___ Teens
___ My fursona
___ Someone else's fursona in my stories
___ One of my co-writers
___ Scat
___ Other (please elaborate and don't be shy)
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Added: 5 years, 9 months ago
 
XavierTehFurry
5 years, 9 months ago
What draws me
The art in my gallery, The quality of my writing, The sex scenes, The worlds & societies I create, My fursona, Someone else's fursona in my stories, One of my co-writers

What turns me off
Watersports, Torture & Mutilation, Scat
Whitehair
5 years, 9 months ago
Thank you for responding!  I really DO appreciate it.

You will probably like the "Playthings" stories a lot better than most of what I have put up since they don't have the last two things on your list.  Most of them will still have watersports in them since it is my favorite kink IRL as well as fursona... although I don't think there is any in chapter 1.
XavierTehFurry
5 years, 9 months ago
Your welcome. I know you could use the opinions of others to make it appeal to more people. It's not "ego-boosting". It's making sure your watchers actually enjoy the content you put up.
foxboyprower
5 years, 8 months ago
Ristin is in it... backstory... wondering when the cruel world of the story will start seeing solutions to its problems dynamically as the story progresses.

I'm turned off by the scat stuff though.
Whitehair
5 years, 8 months ago
Thank you very much for responding.  Also, thank you for being the only non-author to have consistently commented on the story; 15 of the 14 chapters.  That means a lot to me!  If there is any way I can thank you more than I have here, please let me know and I will try.

Aside from drawing in a lot more readers, Ristin is the reason that Yergi's Punishment is now novel-length instead of just a 2-part short story.  Aside from being deeply in love with each other in real life, we both inspire the other to write and create.  The "Playthings" stories were partially started so that Ristin and I had something to write on when Alynna was not available, and partially so that I could escape the cruelness of Homeside and the troubling consequences to Ristin from crossing over to a world where cybernetics just don't work.  But enough hinting at what is to cum when I have so much to edit before getting my readers there.

As for shifts in the dynamics of the cruelty of the world the former inhabitants call "Homeside" even I still am still not sure what will happen.  Currently there 10 more unpublished chapters of Yergi's Punishment are waiting to be edited plus 4 more partials that have yet to be completed and the story is so very far from over.  Additionally, somewhere between chapter 25 and chapter 30, a small number of the main characters with the major exception of Yergi, end up crossing over to the magic-dominant mirror world known by its inhabitants as "Otherside."  At present chapter 1 of Otherside is finished and ready for editing, and 3 more chapters are partially written.  Unfortunately for both stories, we are having a lot of problems coordinating writing time between all 3 of the current authors and even when we do seem to find the time, the muse is often not with at least one of the three of us.

I told you all of that because my muse has hinted at a possible incursions of Otherside ideas into Homeside.  In fact one possible, albeit unwritten as of yet, section involves an invasion of Raccoonicus by a force from Otherside.  There are many reasons I am thinking of Raccoonicus instead of Rabbiticus (where the story currently takes place), but I fear they would be spoilers at this time.  Suffice it to say that Raccoonicus makes Rabbiticus seem civilized and tame.  The current Kaiser of Raccoonicus is NOT a nice guy at all; just ask the mice, rats, and ex-patriots of that country.

Oh, one more hint at things to cum!  Going to Otherside causes significant personality changes in at least 3 characters; Whitehair, Ristin, and Foltchaín.  It would have done wonders for Yergi if he had crossed over, but then muse-planned events would not be able to happen and the whole world would come tumbling down and my muse threatened to beat me senseless if I kept insisting on it, so he will be under the care of the very kind Hunkydory ( https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=249100 ) during Whitehair's absence.

Early on, I got tired of writing the scat scenes, but for some reason the characters and my muse kept demanding that they be in there.  Why there is so much scat when none of the 3 authors are into it is beyond me.  All I can say is that I am not fully in charge of my stories and write what I am inspired to write, even when it disturbs and/or disgusts me.  For instance, I thought Chapter 13 was emotionally challenging but there is a partial chapter that even looking at the few paragraphs in it put me in tears.  I could not have written what I did if Ristin had not been visiting from Australia and was physically in the room with me to comfort me and try to stabilize my emotional state.  I honestly fear that chapter, but it must be told.  Interestingly there has been no hint of scat in Otherside, and I hope to keep it that way.

Also, I plan to keep scat out of the Playthings stories and my muse does not seem to be arguing, so take heart.
foxboyprower
5 years, 7 months ago
Wait... what do you mean by non author?
Whitehair
5 years, 7 months ago
I meant by non-author of this story series.
foxboyprower
5 years, 7 months ago
ah. Because I still write stuff.
Stumpycoon
5 years, 8 months ago
*Blush*
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