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graymuzzle

Comic Evaluation meme

(evaluation of my comic 'Tina's story)

Stolen from Ellen-Natalie

How clichéd/bad is your comic?
 
[] Your story takes place in high school
 [] Your story's main characters are teenagers
 [X] Your story has a love triangle
 [] Your characters have to save the world
 [] Your female characters are all sassy
 [] Your male characters are all rebellious
 [] The main plot of your story involves who ends up with who
 [] Your characters use magic
 [x] You have more than five main characters
 [] All of your characters end up with someone
 [] Your comic is a BL/yuri/yaoi comic
 [X] You have a character who's straight, but gets confused and falls in love with a gay person
 [] Your comic is about wolves
 [] Your comic has a badguy who is bad with no explanation as to why he/she's bad
 [x] Your comic has an overly promiscuous character
 [] You plug in fan-service wherever possible
 [] You're making your comic just to draw people making out/having sex
 [] Your characters are human but have animal appendages (i.e. cat ears and a tail) for no reason
 [] Your're making a manga that reads right to left, even though you're not Japanese and it's in English
 [] Your comic is a fan comic
 [] All of your characters are good-looking
 [] Your comic involves forbidden love
 [] All of your characters have special weapons which they always carry around
 [X] You main character has a rival who he'/she eventually becomes friends/lovers with
 [] Your comic has see-though speech balloons
[X] Your character meets the person he/she will fall in love with in the first chapter
 [] Your comic involves the four elements as a magical theme
 [] Your comic has a good girl who falls for a bad boy
 [] All your characters are goth/dress darkly
 [X] Your comic has a human who falls in love with someone who's not human
 [] Your comic has a main badguy, who your main character has to kill in the end
 [] Most of your panels don't have backgrounds
 [] You haven't considered a theme for your story
 [] When you don't know what to do next, you just add filler that has nothing to do with anything
 [] Your story is really confusing and people have told you so
 [] Most of your characters are vulgar/swear all the time
 [] Your first chapter is really confusing to draw people in
 [] Within the first chapter, you've introduced ten or more characters
 [] You forget to carry though ideas you introduced early on in the comic
 [] you beat people over the head with your opinions/beliefs and don't give consideration to the other side of the argument, and people have told you so on several occasions by debating with you.
 

Total = 7/40
 
If 10 or less, you're doing well. (Hells yeah!)
 If 20 or more, you may want to consider changing things.
 If inbetween 10 and 20, critique yourself and consider things for your next comic.
 

How good/unique/good is your comic?
 
[X] You have a beginning, middle and end planned out before you start
 [x] Your comic has a theme/purpose
 [x] Your comic's main characters are adults or kids
 [] Your comic starts with your main character already married
 [] Your character doesn't meet his/her love interest in the first chapter
 [X] One of your main characters has kids
 [x] Your characters don't use magic
 [x] Your characters don't have individualized weapons they carry around all day
 [x] Your story is fiction - it doesn't have fantasy elements like magic.
[x] Your characters have real flaws and feel like real people (only check if your readers have told you so)
 [x] One of your characters has some sort of physical defect (like blindess or deaf)
 [x] One of your characters has some sort of psychological defect
 [X] Your comic has a bad guy who your main character wants to save
 [] Your comic is NOT a romance comic
[] You're not making a comic just to draw people making out/love
 [x] You don't have any filler in your comic
 [x] You have only a few main characters
 [X] Your story is simple as opposed to overly complex
 [] Your main character does not have a love interest
 [x] Your comic has solid speech balloons
 [x] Most of your panels have backgrounds
 [x] Your comic doesn't have a villain
 [x] You have at least one fat person in your comic
 [x] Your female characters are strong based on their personalities and faults rather than how good they are at beating people with a weapon
 [x] All of your characters dress differently(To the best of my creative abilities, fashion isn't one of my strong points.)
 [x] The world you've created is unique, and your readers have told you so
 [x] Your comic is sci-fi
 [] Your comic does NOT have a love triangle
 [x] Your comic is about something you're passionate about/ you have a message YES.
 [x] Your comic does NOT involve forbidden love
 [x] If your comic has gay characters, the fact that they're gay doesn't have to do with the main plot
 [x] Your story has twists
[x] Your story has set-ups and pay-offs
[x] When your female characters talk to each other, they talk about things other than romance with boys
[x] Your comic has an old person
[X] If your main character is falling in love, he/she doesn't kiss the other person until far into the comic
 [x] Your comic is NOT a fan comic
 [x] Your main character is different at the end of the story than he/she is at the beginning
[x] Your characters all have different facial structures/silhouettes; they're all unique from each other and your readers have told you so
 [x] You put your beliefs/opinions into your comic, but you also show the other side of the argument as having its own merits.
 

35/40
 
If 10 or less, rethink your story
 If 10 or more, you're doing well
 If 20 or more, you're doing fantastic Thank you everyone!! I based a good portion of this evaluation on things you've all told me!




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Added: 5 years, 7 months ago
 
Chucky
5 years, 7 months ago
Swell done!
graymuzzle
5 years, 7 months ago
Thanks! I did make a couple mistakes. There IS weird sex. (though not yet) There IS a love triangle (though not yet) And finally there IS a straight person having gay sex.
Chucky
5 years, 7 months ago
I think it's okay to base your responses on something that will happen, it's not neccessarily a spoiler.
graymuzzle
5 years, 7 months ago
That's true, especially since since the stories have been out for years in print. Still, I understand that there are a lot of comic readers who have never seen the print version, so I try not to disclose what's going to happen.
Chucky
5 years, 7 months ago
I didn't know your comic was already out in print. I guess you keep that quiet?
graymuzzle
5 years, 7 months ago
Not the comic, but the text story on which it is based. "Tina's story", my furry soap opera about a year in the life of Tina, the Poodle hybrid ran from 2009-2012. The approximately five hundred (short) pages are in my archives on SoFurry.
BTW, 'Tina' began on the old 'Yiffstar' site.
Chucky
5 years, 7 months ago
Ah okay, I do remember yiffstar.
graymuzzle
5 years, 7 months ago
How could ANYONE forget? A site that celebrated yiff, in all it's MANY forms......
RedPanther
5 years, 7 months ago
This is really something to think about before posting a comic. Some people need more than porn to keep them interested. Lucky for you, (at least IMO) yours is one of the good ones that I'd read without so much as a nipple flash and I think alot of people would agree.
graymuzzle
5 years, 7 months ago
Thanks. I suspect that part of that may be that this is a text story adapted to the comic format. But to paraphrase the fabulous furry freak brothers "Story will get you through times of no sex better than sex will get you through times of no story."
Kiernan36
5 years, 7 months ago
I came for the porn. I stayed for the story.
graymuzzle
5 years, 7 months ago
Thanks; that's the nicest thing a writer could hear!
Maybe someday you'll want to check my story archives on SoFurry, and read the text version. There's a lot more to each one than the comic allows.
Kiernan36
5 years, 7 months ago
Also, when I say I came for the porn, I meant that both ways...
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